ah, so thats what happened, i must agree to the who wrote the pretty long comment, your story is good, superb to be accurate, and i heard what you did, i wouldnt say that youre a fail as a writter, everyone makes mistakes, you just made mistakes,
i would really be glad if you try to correct what you did by making new series of sephirah, and thats one of the reason why for me youre not a failure, sephirah is a good book, and a good product comes from a dood producer.. hope you read this, and i insistbthat you make another book, just let me know, ill read it,