RhPeat

Thanx for the follow Fariha.
          
          I'm not on Wattpad that much, so enjoy my poems as you will. If you make comment I'll respond. I commented on one of your poems while I was here. I recommend  you learn the difference between an identity and a rhyme. And you might think about actual rhyme schemes in the poem as well. They will create more of an actual melody. Putting distance between the rhymes might actually help your poetic line construction without forcing the rhyme so much. The cadence of accents in the lines forms a  beat for the melody of the rhymes. Have fun.
          
          a poet friend
          RH Peat

AwesomeWanderer_24

Hey thanks a lot for the follow but if you don't mind me asking y do you follow me ??.. not to be rude i m just curious about it because you haven't voted or commented on any of my works ... sorry if i sound rude ...

fariha_fayaz

Well, @ Aisha_CrazyGirl... , I've read ur poem' my mother ' nd even commented and voted.i think u forgot....
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