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iloveualways
Apr 04, 2011 07:42AM
@Myrandahey your welcome. Your story was amazing. I was wondering if you could maybe read my story and give me some feed back. :). Ur an amazing writer. xxView all Conversations
Story by iloveualways
- 1 Published Story
the bank robbery-(not the best tit...
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my very first story and i need feedback!!! its a prety good story though