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@ljgella kamsamhanida..
            your comment is really helpful. 
            and you got my intention sa story. actually as you observe sa first 2 part medyo light lang na scene ang nilalagay ko but when it comes sa middle it took it slow and down to put some twist and emotion sa story. Thanks so much talga.
            tama you got it also when the trials comes because it spice up the story and made the reader to read more, well actually, im not good in writing good grammar and sentences as long as i can feel the emotion of thwe character sa story ay yung impotante hehehe.. nahihiya nga ako minsan sa mga grammars ko and construction kasi hindi talaga ako writer..
            
            and finally, hehehe thank you kasi youve got my true intention of bringing up this story...the Moral lesson I portray here in every character. 
            
            saranghae. mwahhhh

@ljgella thank you! and welcome ulit :)
            
            anyway,  with what you said, if that is your main purpose then you are nailing it... :) i understand and maybe the other readers as well that there are still other trials that the characters will need to pass... considering the type of the story and as you said, that is the flow. especially kc narereveal na din ung mga secrets and mysteries from the past.
            
            isa pa, the trials and heartbreaking scenes add to the beauty of the story... the way you put those in the story is actually good. for me, ung nagpa balanse sa mga heavy scenes for the past chapters ay yung persona ng mga characters, ung traits nila.. as well as the idea of friendship and family.... you've done it really well that your readers just dont feel the emotions of the story but they, we are getting realizations and lessons about it.
            
            so dont worry! you are making a great story here and im sure you will nail it til the end... tska sa isang story, it's not just all about the happy or kilig moments... it is also with the trials and how the characters surpass them... that way, hindi lang basta ung story ung maaalala namin kundi pati ung mga lessons na natutunan at matututunan pa namin from your story. :)
            
            go for it... we'll continue to read :)

@ginzae91 thanks so much beh for your comments sa story it really help me to write more eventhough I thought that my story is quite simple lang pero naappreaciate ko kasi nararamdaman ng readers yung emotion na gusto kong iportray sa story. actually, I've been sad sa plot ng story ko this past few chapter kasi super heartbreaking talaga at lalo na ang mga readers na supportive sa Jailene ay nagrereact kung kailan magiging okay si Shar but wala akong magawa sa storyline ng story ko kasi yung yung flow nya when I think of situation noon before ako magstart magsulat ng story na ito and I am happy na somewhat naipakita ko yung emotion na iyon sa iyo.
            The reason why I put author's POV or puro authors POV na ata laaht ng ginawa ko para mapalawak pa ang story sa other character sa story.. and I hope magustuhan mo pa ang mga next chapter ko..pero baka hindi rin cause theres lot of trial pa ang pagdadaanan nila. The main purporse to me in writing it kasi beh is to portray what the emotion ng charater sa mga pagsubok na pinagdadaanan nila either it is happy or sad, kilig or selos...kasi I want to justify what I write in my prolouge all about Love. and with that Thanks so much with a gazillion kisses and hug from me. Saranghae.

@ginzae91 goodmorning

@ljgella ur always welcome ;)

@ginzae91 wow really im excited for your story. just share it with me and I read it. wow.. I am happy that I inspire you to write keep it up. thank u for the support.

@ljgella your always welcome... and thank you din! :)
            
            with what you said, i guess you're right... putting your heart in every work you do is the key for it to work or be effective... and that's what you're doing...
            
            salamat for inspiring me... i'm thinking of a plot right now and i'll do my best to create that story... i'll try :)
            
            and i'll definitely support you in your stories... just keep on getting better ;)- you're there already...
            
            THANKS ulit and GodBless! :)

@ginzae91 wow I didn't expect on your comment. 
            
            yes, partly nalilito ang readers sa daming POV ko pero I started it na madaming POV kaya tinuloy ko na lang but maybe I just lessen na lang yung mga POV and try to label it properly para di malito ang readers. and no. 1 na mahirap magsulat is iyong madaming character.
            
            wow I didn't expect on how I write. but for me kasi I just put myself to what I write iyong feeling ko ako ang author. I just want to balance the scene kasi kung medyo heavy na parang ang lungkot naman pero I am happy na nadadala ka sa every scene and its really uplift me on writing more. I may not good in writing but I have bless with good imagination and I am happy that I can portray each character to u at makarelate kayo my readers. actually, nangangamba nga ako every chapter baka di magustuhan ng readers pero I am glad na super supportive kayo and I am thankful for that. 
            
            and with you beh keep it up as long as you enjoy writing whats on your mind eh magagawa mo rin na magenjoy magsulat. 
            
            thank u so much for your support. haha gusto ko ipalaminate ang comment mo sa akin. nakakatouch kasi. and dont hesitate also to comment negative kasi gusto ko rin iyan for my improvement. Godbless and enjoy reading my story til the end. mwahhhh I will dedicate one chapter to you. GB

@ljgella welcome ;)

@ginzae91 thank u. enjoy

@ljgella ur welcome! :) ngayong week ko lang nkita ung story pero nagustuhan ko :) keep it up! aabangan ko ung mga susunod na chapters! God bless!