mycrazydiaries

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Hey 
          
          First I must say it’s a terrifying experience. Definitely got me on edge throughout the storyline. I read thousands of stories literally and there are few that’s genuinely had impact on me. It’s more than the story itself the way a writer portray the characters that you forget what was it before the character. And you did an incredible work with that.
          
          First of all it will definitely take me few days to look at Jeon normally again cause damn the characterisation was too intense that I can’t look at him normally now. You made me second guessing if all I believed till now was a mask. I give u that you definitely have your readers undivided attention.
          Now coming to the story, I am a person who believes in perspectives like I believe every thing have different perspectives which we often don’t get to see same with ppl. This story has been roller coaster. I will start with Tae definitely a sweet guy but ohh I was definitely pissed in between when he didn’t try to understand her side. He should have been with her when shit went down. Definitely understandable that ppl have different ways to react. I tried to understand him but when the conversation with jimin happened he was like she left n he is feeling like she did everything wrong don’t sit well with me. Cause I was hoping atleast after her leaving he would understand how badly it affected her. I am not wronging him at all but that do made me wonder if he actually truly loved her cause his opinions kept swaying back n forth. But I am happy he gave a choice to her in the end. 
          
          And Jeon ohh man where do I begin. You gave a lots of shades to this character. I genuinely wanted to understand where he is coming from. He is vulnerable. He thought she was pathetic but tbh it was him. He was scared to fall in love n scared that she would hurt him to cop up with that he hurt her before so he can’t be in pain. I felt bad for him cause he genuinely felt like a lost kid.

mycrazydiaries

He did love her cause ohh fvck man he was ready to rip the world apart for her. He was there with her when she was breaking though he ended up messing up later. I was waiting if he will find a way to get out of his bubble of trauma n not hurting them both. I am not angry with him cause I felt he was just lost n he didn’t know the right way to show love which he was not even ready to acknowledge cause that scared him. But yeah some actions can’t be justified no matter what.
            
            I was waiting for the ending cause I wanted to see how u gonna wrap this story. I was genuinely genuinely hoping she won’t end up with either with how the current characters are. Cause Jeon though love her doesn’t know how to love her properly without breaking her and Tae didn’t love her enough to doesn’t care about anything but her. So I am glad to read the ending you chose where she chose her own path than having to be forced with any one. Cause not every story needs to have the typical happy ending n main lead has to end up with someone no matter what n they drastically change. This ending felt more satisfying than any.
            
            Definitely damn characterisation and damn story line
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fictionalmenarchive

I really wanna say that author you really slayed ‍↔️ like ate and left no crumbs✨✨ and one request too plz continue this storyyy plzzz author  even though sora deserve to be at peace—but still I wanna know how jk reacted, how taehyung is thinking, does jk gets to know that taehyung helped her, and yuna does she gets back with sora or my poor baby yearns for her sister