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hi guys! may bago akong story 'Dale Renton: School Of Monsters' mystery/thriller siya with a touch of romance hehez. Sana may time kayo para basahin ito at i-vote! PERO mas masaya kong magcocomment din kayo! FREE TO CRITICIZE MY WORK AND PLEASE DO TELL ME KUNG MALI MALI NA YUNG GRAMMAR HHIHI!♥
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