milijain_04

Also guys ap muje cover picture edit karke batao iska koi acha sa 

farheenunfiltered

"Hey dosto
          
          Sabse pehle ek chhoti si maafi - shayad aapko meri posts aur story promotions bar-bar dikh rahi hongi. Main jaanti hoon kabhi kabhi ye thoda zyada lagta hai, lekin meri kahani 'Mohabbat (Sabr aur Shukr)' mere dil ke bahut kareeb hai.
          
          Isliye thoda zyada pyaar aur promotion karna banta hai.
          
          Aapka ek chhota sa support (likes, votes, comments ya bas ek baar padh lena) mere liye bahut badi motivation ban jata hai.
          
          Main promise karti hoon aapko sirf ek kahani nahi, balki ek ehsaas milega jo dil ko choo lega.
          
          So agar aapne abhi tak check nahi kiya, to zaroor ek nazar daliye aur apne honest reviews share kijiye.
          
          Aapki duaein aur pyaar hi meri writing ka asli sahara hain.
          
          Aur phir se ek badi si SORRY agar kabhi aapko meri promotions zyada lagti ho... lekin kya karein, dil ki baat sabke dil tak pohchaana bhi to zaroori hai.https://www.wattpad.com/story/400583631?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=farheenunfiltered

innocentgirl18175

Hello 

innocentgirl18175

yashisharma1529  yeh meri insta I'd h aap ispar message Kar sakti ho kal kyuki aaj m mummy ke saath Bahar jaa rahi hu 
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innocentgirl18175

Your story is really interesting and I love it 
            But it's just your way of writing that sometimes I confuse kon kya Kah raha h aur kis se Kah raha h
            Bas vhi par aapko tumhe improvement ki jarurat h 
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innocentgirl18175

I want to send you some photos related to how you should write dialogue 
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