BTS book review

In The Name Of Love

Book title: In The Name Of Love

Username: Irtiza_yesmeen

Cover 7/10

The cover looks great but I find it hard to read your your name on it and if it's possible to make it slightly bigger so we can see it clearly.

Description  4/10

Okay now onto the description please avoid adding quotes from chapters from the book because it just gives away too much away, what I do suggest you is write down a small simple poetry in the name of love and leave

Plot  2/10

Okay the plot looks interesting however there's a lot of mistakes in your grammar and a lot of sentences that is either missing or just simply does not make sense and that's where it can off putting and loses the flow of the story. The story has a lot of potential but what's putting down the story is the grammatical errors and unnecessary words that does not need to be there.

Characters 7/10

Yi Ana a doctor and Jungkook a CID I like how you are using different professions for the characters it makes it authentic in your storytelling on an Alternative BTS Universe. Despite Yi Ana has a profession and a child of her own she's still suffering the loss of her parents after 8 years of their passing, I feel sympathy for her in so many levels and I also like the fact it shows that doctors also are human beings that go through a lot hardships and make mistakes.
Jungkook obviously begins as a mysterious guy at first but but he seemed a bit of an ass because 1 he hits on or makes a move on Yi Ana a bit too fast in my opinion plus he was rude to her telling her to hurry up in treating the patient that he clearly beat the crap out of and even he has his own injuries himself from "fighting".

Cliché scale  7/10

The cliché isn't too bad as you are trying to be authentic with your craftsmanship in your story.

What to improve?

To be honest the grammar needs a lot of work that should be your PRIME in other words to be your number one priority to be worked on before you start a new story and then double check it, I'm not sure if English is your first language but ask someone who is an English expert to help you.

Secondly try to be more creative on your description in creating a poet about "Love" or "What is love".