Error In The Multiverse (Fgod(?)) [in process of editing ==>>]

Chapter Eleven Draft and notice

[New Area, New Multiverse]

third person POV

Finally, with Pale beside them and all secured, Template sighed. "You promise to not harm the AUs ever again yet?" he grumbled tiredly, having been sitting in the same place for hours probably- arms getting tired as he continued to hug Pale in place. "nope." Came a quiet, monotone response. Devoid of emotion, nevertheless care at all for the slowly falling aseep skele behind him. "I'll, *yawn* stay here until you do then-! ..Your really quite, aren't you? Come onn- please talk?" Template begged. Look, he disliked the white emptiness enough as is, and the silence to add on to it? Yeah,, he wouldn't like that. "..." "Oh come on...!"

Huffing, Template decided to look around- Since Pale wasn't necessarily cooperating here.

Pale's anti void was.. pretty empty, not that it was suprising.

A small puddle of pitch black ink was beside them where they sat, along with many stickers Template'd given them that read "BANNED" and "STOP". 'he kept those? pfft- but seriously- i really wish he'd stop going to lusttales jeez!!'

Opening his mouth to say something Template paused- eyelights shrinking. He wasnt sure exactly what, but something suddenly seemed entered his soul- injecting itself inside like a small needle- tearing his soul apart. 

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i reread this book  and ya kno wut? gunna rewrite this