Final Notes <3

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Hi everyone,
Thanks so much for making it to the end. Each one of my readers makes me happy.
As you are all aware, regular updates are really something I struggle with. I would like to write another book but I don't think anyone would be patient enough to read it... thoughts?

Now, my notes on season 4.
*spoilers obviously*
Overall, I loved it. 9/10. Seeing Player and Carm meet was awesome, seeing Chase's character development was great and of course there were lots of RedCrackle moments.
I'm just going to dot-point my thoughts for simplicity, feel free to add yours in the comments!

Positives:
-Tigeress in Egypt in her different outfit was hot
-Carmen & Player's meeting scene was so pure and done perfectly
-The way Gray got his memories back honestly makes far more sense than what I've written
-I love that Ivy & Zack are ACME now, I feel like Zack could be Chase Jnr.
-The way they wrote that scene between Carmen and Gray in episode four was absolute perfection.

Negatives:
-Carmen & Grays ending. If nothing else, they needed closure (obviously would've loved more but). What they went through would be quite traumatic and I felt like they should've talked about that, instead of Gray just being like "no I'm not speaking to her I'll only make things complicated." Things were already complicated, they should've talked about their experiences.
-I wish the team didn't split up. Leaving a note and upping was a bit lousy of Carmen not going to lie.
-NO SONIA. I love Sonia and honestly thought we would see more of her.
-I wish they told us Carmens real name. The whole "here are your files, and yes they include your birth name." Reveal, followed by not telling us, was just cruel.
-I wanted to know Player's first name, "Mr Bouchard" ain't gonna cut it.
-I wanted to see Carmens mothers face

Neutral:
-I feel like there are still too many loose ends. I hope we get a special episode or a spin off to clear things up
-That Carmen on the roof at the very end. I don't think it was Carmen, I think it could've been Sonia. From what we've seen they have similar hair textures and we didn't see the person's hair in the light, there's no telling whether it was red or not.
-The scene where Shadowsan was like "many could be Carmen" and they flashed up clips of various girls (that are all incredible) from previous episodes could be hinting at some sort of spin off, maybe Carmen/Shadowsan train them?

I'll update this as I think of more :)
For now, thanks again for reading. I hope you enjoyed the book, I certainly enjoyed writing it. Love you all oxox

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