The Culinary School Drop Out

This is my first attempt at a story please don't be to harsh on me :-/ I hope you don't hate it too much...

When Kailora turned 18 she moved out of her sisters house to go away to Culinary School. Although the school also had different programs. She got into student housing with help of financial aid. She lived in a gorgeous & huge apartment with roommates in different programs from the school.The apartments were only a mile down the street from the school. On the first day of school she met a girl in most of her classes & they became friends.The girl was named Charity. Charity was in the baking & pastry class but both culinary & pastry had the same fundamental & basic begining classes. There was also a cute guy in the class named Reece. Reece was in the same Culinary program as Kailora. Both girls had a major crush on Reece, Although Kailora had a boyfriend at the time it was just a simple harmless crush. Reece started seeing another student from the class named Melody. Both Charity & Kailora always wanted to be in the same group as Reece, or his partner in the situations where they had to do partners, seeing as he was one of the best cooks in the class hands down.

Please Tell me if I should continue or give up...