[OLD]the creation of evil louie duck

the origin of luis

the origin of luis. LOUIE AGE 4 :  

"dewey give my lolly pop back ! " said louie . "no i want it! " said dewey . dewey accidently breaks the lolly pop ." NOO!! " said louie . louie starts crying  . suddenly louie feels like he is falling . he falls through a big open dark creepy area . he sees another duck in the distance . " hello ? " said louie . " yes ? " said luis ." wh-who are you ?" asked louie in a frightened tone . " oh don't worry . i won't hurt you . i am luis your ... well ... alter ego . the thing that protects you . " said luis ." if you want i can go up there and solve the problem that dewey started " said luis .        " you know .. him breaking your lolly pop ? " said luis . " well ... ok . but don't hurt him " said louie . " ok i wont " said luis with his fingers crossed behind his back , meaning that he is lying . luis floats up to the top so he can control louie's body . now luis is in control of louie's body.            " now for the real fun " says luis . luis walks over to the kitchen to grab a butter knife . he walks over to dewey with the knife and says : " you shouldn't have broken my lolly pop " . says luis .          suddenly dewey felt a sharp pain in his back and screams . . . .  

AAAH!!! screamed dewey  . dewey passes out from the pain and blood pouring from his back . what the hell!?  yelled donald duck . luis quickly put the knife down and ran and hid in a closet. luis watched as donald aided dewey . donald took dewey to the emergency room in a nearby hospital . that left just huey and luis in the room . luis stepped out of the closet. huey was hiding behind the cupboard in the middle of the room .  oooh huebert? says luis in a creepy tone . luis comes around the cupboard and sees huey . huey try's to make a break for it , but luis catches huey by the back of his shirt . huey gags from being pulled on the back of the shirt  .   5 days later ! huey was sitting down , eating pancakes with syrup . huey gets up to get a glass of milk . luis quickly walks over and pours poison on huey's food . after doing that, huey goes back over to eat his food . huey takes a big bite of pancakes .  1 hour later ! huey is choking and coughing . huey suddenly throws up. huey gets up to tell uncle donald, but  he falls down and passes out . donald sees huey and then sees louie with the bag of poison . donald gasps. and he then walks over and takes the bag of poison . did you do this !?!? . asked donald with a frightened tone . yes . . . yes i did ....( said luis . )               

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