Oh No!

NATSU!

AUTHORS NOTE:This is my first story plz don't be harsh but at the same time plz tell me how I can improve my writing your giudance will be greatly appreciated!

DISCLAIMER: I dont own Fairy Tail saldy all rights go to the original creator Hiro Mashima

         It was a dreary nasty day it was pouring outside on a young fire mage named Natsu Dragneel, he uses Dragon Slayer magic and is an ability type wizard. Natsu was relieved Happy had flown off to go with Carla, Wendy , and Team Shadow Gear on a job. He arrived at his house he unlocked the door and walked in but he forgot to re-lock the door. He wandered upstairs to his bathroom. As soon as he got there he went to one of the walls and pressed one of the tiles inwards. The tile below the one he pressed poped out to reveal a little black wooden box. He retrieved the box and opened it. He surveyed the contents of the box. Anyone would think he's crazy for doing this they call people like him 'Freaks, messed up, insane, crazy' he knew if anyone found out well... he didn't want to think about it. He used a magic he hid from the others called hidden magic to hide both of his dark secrets. Scars up and down his arms appeared but that wasnt all his body started to change he grew boobs and his body became slimmer his face was more defined he was a GIRL!. Natsu smirked as she read the words she carved into herself they said 'stupid, idiot, useless...' She fished the blade out of the box and dragged it down her arm. She watched with fascination as the blood trickled down her arm. She let out a dark chuckle no one would suspect her of doing this for she was Natsu Dragneel the clown the dumb idiot the happy one who never frowned they also would never know about her being femine either. She dragged the blade down again but deeper more blood spilled from the fresh wound. The world around Natsu started to spin things became fuzzy but she didn't pass out. She also did not hear the foot steps or someone calling her name. She thought to herself 'Why should I keep living I have nothing to live for... ' she paused in mid thought then she thought again 'I am ending this tonight after tonight I will no longer exist in this world who knows mabey I be sent to hell... wouldn't that be nice' she got ready to make the final cut the one that would end her pointless life but all of a sudden a serious wave a nausea and dizzness hit her she started to see spots. The last thing she heard before the world darkend around her was someone screaming desperately "NASTU!"

AUTHORS NOTE: Was this to short or was something wrong with it? I know I'v already said this but I'm going to say it again, if you belive I've made a mistake plz let me know I would love to know how you belive I can improve my writing.
From yours truly,
NightHawk131