Depressed Naruto

Beginning

I do not in any way own any of the characters in this story all rights go to viz media and kishimoto.  Also '    ' means thinking and "    " means speaking
--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------Our story starts off with a 16 year old Naruto Uzumaki, Naruto is a very smart child exceeding the IQ of his classmate Shikamaru Nara, he is taking an alley way to his house as a man named Kiba Inuzuka approaches him "Hey freak" Kiba would smirk at him with an evil look with his arm wrapped around his girlfriend hinata "K-k-kiba-kun we shouldn't bother him today" the shy girl says "No the demon gets what he deserves" Says the grinning Inuzuka 'Oh great not this again' says the blonde "Im not in a good mood dog breath get out my way or you'll regret it" "HAHAHAHA, as if you could hold a candle to me you freak" Kiba charges at him with his fist and swings at naruto "Heh" Naruto would catch him and throw him into a wall "You look like a fool" He'd walk out of the alley way the villagers would spot him "Hey demon freak" they'd say, Naruto would look up with a smile and say "Hey guys? want to talk about something?" the villagers would laugh "Hahaha no we dont you freak!" They'd start throwing rocks at him, Two fox ears would appear in place of his real ears and a fox tail would  appear from his back side right above his butt, the villagers would shake in fear and run away. Naruto would look back and see his tail and say "Im really a monster..." He'd run home crying. He'd open his door and say "I'm home!" No reply but his echo would welcome him, he'd sigh as he realizes he'd never be loved, "I have to find out why I have a tail and fox ears what does this mean, why do I have it" Lets cut to a girl, walking through the streets of konoha, this girl was very beautiful.. the only way to describe her was something sent from the god himself, Dark red hair, Fox ears that would twitch at every sound she heard, beautiful green eyes, pale white skin, a symetrical face that was beautiful nothing you've ever seen, she had big breast, a slim waist, and a big ass, and 9 lucious fluffy tails, she'd walk past a group of villagers and hear "She looks like that demon freak" she'd get startled and think 'Looks like me?' she'd think to herself she'd walk over to the group and they'd shake "H-h-hey miss.." they'd shake, "Tell me more about this demon freak you speak of" They'd all get grins and say "You plan on beating him up?" She'd hold back her anger knowing that this could very well be another human being treated like this however she was just as mad at the thought her own kind could be treated like this she'd put on a evil smile "Yes.." they'd all laugh "He lives right there" they'd point to a house down the street isolated from other houses "Thank you" She'd storm off with an angry expression on her face. Lets go to Naruto, Naruto would pick up a knife stained with blood and put it against his scarred wrist, in one swift motion he'd cut wincing a little bit "Another" he'd say "ANOTHER" "ANOTHER" "ANOTHER" He'd yell, but then a knock at the door would interrupt him, he'd answer the door putting one hand infront of his face and one hand opening the door half expecting to be hit, He'd hear a feminine voice say "I wont hurt you boy" He'd lower his hands slowly being cautious  "Who are you and what do you want from me?" "I see you have tails" He'd put up his hands expecting to be hit, she'd add on "Like me, you must be of my race." He'd lower his hands noticing her tails shocked "L-l-like you" He'd notice her features at this point "Yes may I ask of your name boy?" he'd be staring at her with a nose bleed "Hm something wrong?" He'd look up and say "Yo-you-your beautiful"
She'd blush "why thanks but i'm afraid you look too young for me, anyways can I have your name" He'd snap back to reality and answer "Naruto.. naruto uzumaki" she'd gasp "Y-your kushinas child" she'd say in a startled tone "How do you know my mother who are you" "I am a old friend of your mothers you can call me karma" she'd pause "your mother she was of my kind which would explain your tail" he'd look back at his tail and back at her "Okay I understand that but what do you want with me" she'd look up at him, "now that I know you are kushinas child would you like to come with me naru-kun?" He'd think for a moment, "If it means I get away from this village then hell yeah but are you sure you want to take me" She'd look at him with confusion "Why would you even ask me that" Naruto would get sad "No one has ever loved me let alone let me get close to them and live under the same roof as them" She'd look at him with a sad look feeling sorry for him "Of course ill take you in" He'd look at her with his bright blue eyes and hug her "My lady!" She'd be startled and look at him confused "My lady?" she'd say in a confused tone "Yes, My lady you are nice enough to communicate with me and give me company something no one has ever gave me or even thought about giving me I am in debt to you and will do anything to pay you back my lady, you are like a lord to me you are my saviour" She'd tear up and hug him back "M'Lady, I will do anything for you I will kill for you.." she'd break the hug and look him in the eyes "Lets go boy I will bring you to a village where you are accepted..."
--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------This probably wont get many readers since I suck at capitalization and punctiuation but it was fun to write 1,026 words I havent even written an essay that long so it seems pretty long to me but then again im a lazy individual, anyways no matter how lazy I am I swear chapter 2 will be out tomorrow around 10:50 PM EST, also this is a fan fic ive wanted to see for a long time, while I have seen it done on here I havent seen it done a way I see satisfactory to me, I hope you enjoy it as much as I do.