The Green pill- A kotlc story

Chapter 5: Keefe POV

As soon as we get to Daddio's beach house, I go and take a quick shower. Once I'm done, ro suggests (More like forces) me to eat something. When I don't give in, she says that if I don't eat something, she wouldn't let me go back to havenfeild. Soooooo I think we all know I finally gave in. I ate some prattles and looks around the house for anything quick to eat and went back to havenfeild and finish my drawing.

------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- It's the third afternoon and Sophie's still asleep. 'HOW DOES SHE SLEEP FOR SO LONG!' 

"So how long have you been here?" Edaline asks.

"Ummm...all day."

"Oh, I know. But were you here last night?"

"Yeah." She doesn't say anything. She just smiles and mutters something to herself. I could've sworn I heard meant to be and I knew she must have been thinking about my feelings for mysterious miss f.

"I know what you going to say and-"

"Do you?" She asks.

"Well...Kinda?"

"I was going to say I think it's sweet that you cared enough to stay here for her." I'm so shocked by her answer that I surprisingly don't jump when the door slams open. Fitz comes in yelling and for a second I'm worried that he's heard the whole conversation. It takes me a while to realize he's not yelling at me. 

"You realize we're never going to find anything right!? You keep hiding everything important!" He screams into the  imparter. "well if you were a strong enough telepath you would be able to get past it." My father responds, hanging up the imparter. Fitz mutters a bunch of stuff under his breathe. "Apparently I HAVE TO go help your dad with his memories now!" Fitz complains, slamming Sophie's door on his way out. About 30 minutes later Edaline starts venting about how worried she is that Sophie might not wake up. She even starts getting me a little worried. About an hour passes when she finally changes the subject. But it wasn't exactly the best subject change. "So when are you going to tell her?" Edaline asks. I think I know what she's talking about, but maybe she won't bring it up.

"what do you mean?" I ask

"I mean when are you going to tell Sophie how much you care about her?" Well that was an understatement! He didn't JUST care about her. But all I said was 

"I-I don't know" I mumbled.

"well you should. It seems to be bothering you lately." She says.

"what are you talking about?" I ask.

"When I came to check on Sophie, you were asleep at the desk with your drawings. I started cleaning up the mess when I found a drawing you were working on in a gold journal..." She stopped there, like she knew he knew where she was going with this.

"That was just...ummm" Before he could finish, Sophie started moving. Edaline went to her side and Sophie's eyes started to open. "where am I?"

Well! That's the end of my short Keefe POV! Pls let me know if I should write more stuff and if so, what to write about? I'm here to answer questions, but right now I have to questions for you.

1) Did I do a good Keefe impression? The Main thing I noticed when reading on here was that many people have trouble making a good impression of the real keefe, if that makes sense.

2) what should I write about next? I've been wanting to write this ever since the scene in the book. So I've hade a while to write this, but I just found out about Wattpad. I KNOW RIGHT! HOW COULD I NOT KNOW ABOUT WATTPAD! anyway, please tell me what I should write about next.

And don't forget, I'm her to answer questions!