(Remake of "This Place Hotel") [Version 1]
Eve stays at The Heartbreak Hotel until her apartment is completely finished. During her stay, she intercounts with something evil.
I walked back to my room after another day of failing to seek internet. What am I going to do? No internet, no phone. Not even a newspaper. Ugh, what else now? I heard loud banging at the door.
"Who's there?"
No sound, just silence. Hm, maybe its room service. I got up to open the door. There's no one there just the hallway. Miss. Thompson never told me about room service. I must be hearing things. I closed the door & turn on the television. All there was playing were old televison shows. There's nothing wrong with old timey shows. I use to watch them whenever there wasn't any cable. These were the basic shows.
"Ugh, who watch these shows still?"
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I screamed & headed towards the wall. Where did she come from? I'm pretty sure I locked the door.
"Who are you?"
"The question is who are you?" She switched it around.
"What is your name?"
"Annie McNeal." She said.
She must be someone's kid that's staying here. I can tell she's tomboyish by her attire & body language. But added a dash of girlish just to keep the people wondering. Her bright ruby red lipstick sticks to her lips like a tattoo. I can't see her entire face because of the sunglasses she has on.
"What are you doing here?"
"I knocked but no one answered." She sat on the heart-shaped couch.
"No one was there."
"That's the point of the game." She said.
"What game?"
"You knocked, no one sees you so you think it's just a prank. It happens to a lot of people around here." She said.
"Yeah, I bet your the one that's pranking everyone."
"Are you trying to imply that I'm a troublemaker?" She questioned.
"Your in my hotel room without my permission."
"You opened the door which made it okay for me to enter." She said.
"No one was out there! So how the fuck did you get in?"
