I will delete this in a weeks time but I just wanted to let you know that I'll still be posting to this story I've just hit a roadblock with the villains backstory as I'm forever changing my mind . I'll try and write a chapter tomorrow but I don't know I have a one shot to write so it depends on how long that takes to write and my mood . I genuinely have so many ideas for this story but I just focus on life after the kidnapping but I'll overcome that hurdle.
-Next chapter: villains backstory and point of view
-Then: families prospective
-day in the life of being kidnapped
- plan to escape
-lead on getting Kara back
-plan failed
-lead fallen through
- hopeless
I'm trying to create feelings for my readers so you get hopeful for the character and when there plan fails you feel relieved and hopefully as the other side are closer to getting Kara back but that doesn't happen and the reader ends up feeling sympathy for the protagonist. I feel like doing them in separate chapters creates the emotions for the reader that are similar to the feelings of the characters. You know I think I've been doing to much English work lol.
Goodbye I'm just rambling now
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Captured (a Danvers sister story )
FanfictionKara was a young girl from a unknown planet called krypton when she arrived on earth she was 13 and had just lost her whole world. The danvers family took her in and adopted her , now she's 17 and in high school . Her older sister Alex Danvers work...
