my sister's wish

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pov ???- it's cold and dark but all I can see is blood HER as a man in black runs away leaving a small knife on the ground covered in blood MY SISTERS BLOOD. no, why she's bleeding out "I call out for help BUT NOBODY CAME. her phone I can call the police as I grab her phone I see that she was dead. I scream an old woman heard me and my sister and called the cops but when they get there she was gone. the car was almost salient aside from the radio going off now and then but all I can think of is my sister and how her blood painted the sidewalk red.  I was snapped out of my thoughts when one of the cops said we here I look to see my mom and dad. my mom's eyes were red from crying her heart out on his shoulder but my dad was strangely silent all he did was look down like he knew something. I got out of the car my mom ran to me hugging me and I couldn't hold back my tears as I cried in her arms but in an instant, I wished to

see

her

one

last

time

as the first cop was with my parents I hear my name and my friends, Maddy and zaddy both near my age. they ran to me asking what happened I couldn't say anything I only stare at them with a look of sadness all the questions with no answer led to more questions to more disappointment it was too much for my mom to handle and she fainted on the spot I saw as she falls but I didn't move I was in my mind and then I hear sera it broke my trance my name was called I blink my eyes to see my dad yelling at me to go in the house but why I said just go he screamed I didn't want to but I follow his order as I walked up the stairs and instead of going to my room I went to Dana's room it was blue with gold accents on her walls with a purple tint to her windows and ballet posters in pink and blue in gold frames and pics of the family and mom in her past ballet uniform she was so amazing she still is now but because of me she had to stop Dana was inspired to be like mom see it all brought back to as I laid in her bed and cried myself to sleep.

~~author's note~~ hi I am new to this so plzzz tell  me how I did and how I can improve my work I hope I can make more so give me ideas byeeeee