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Hellllooooooo freaky people who decided to read my story! First of all thank you and second of all I love you!
No the reason im making this is to let people know that the story is going thru some MAJOR editing and adding detail and scenario I kinda jumped the shark in a lot of MAJOR details but want these two to go thru some fish before getting together and a lot of these things maybe way to mature for some 17-19 year old people to go thru but then again I feel a life with magic hold a lot more responsibility (yes spider man RIP Steven) fred and George is involved later into this because I feel their characters were wayyyy underplayed if you don't get the big anime drops and lore Olympian drops please please look them up! I dont not own any of this stuff my imagination is just vast like freaking g ocean! I love idea of more different cultures and religions so obviously thier is nordic wicca and some Japanese folk lore in this because of this I also make a lot of sexual smutty goodness because the great right in almost all magic bring extream raw power and has been a long time used for this. But does not mean im making Hermione some toy to pass around her character in this extremely conflicted with keeping one self pure and willing to learn to explore and understand wants that come with age. Also how I felt around that time in high school I dont know about my readers but my family was big into hunting drinking and fighting and I feel these real life conflictions where blurred out by Disney (dont kill me Disney is the real government. Jk) anyways. Draco is a complex character for me to make, I didn't like that she went so strictly with the fact that people only wanted Hermione and Drsco together because it was Emma Watson and Tom Felton (Tom your hot but it wasn't because of you) I disagree hugely on this personally complex emotions and lack of understanding of anyone's nature is blurred thru school especially when you LIVE there for so many months I use summer as a good way to break ice. But i do believe Draco malfoy no matter what wanted be a death eater it is why we all simp for him to be quite honest, though I feel the reason could be A LOT better and more complex to fit certain hesitation to harry. Also bump that cry baby attitude we wont have that here no no . This all that will give up for now, keep an eye out for up dates to above Part because honestly I didn't plan on sharing this story I do it when I'm bored and is a passion of mine I love ideas and would love help editing because I am dyslexic not as bad as I use to be but could really use help with paragraphs spelling mess up and what not because I do go back and read but when you his over 60,000+ words it takes a while (I have other chapters of this I'm working on three of the about 50 pages long)
But without further ado enjoy my smutty master peace in progress