Teens with power rings (book 1)

The house

Bell was shy girl but this year she said that everyone would know her. Bell smelled something weird she opened her eyes then saw her looking pale and with a sword threw her. Her dead self said in a soft voice "you have to make Ty and Adam be friends or this well happen to you" and gave her a ring " were it or die" said dead bell. (The ring had a smoke with a eye in the middle and she put on ring) Bell did not know who Ty or Adam is the her dad came in and told her to get ready bell rides a skateboard to school on the way she hits a bump a went in the air and saw broken glass on the floor close her eyes and a bell ringed she opened your eyes and she was in school and went to home room. Bell went to her locker to get her stuff then fell to the floor she felt like she was being shocke her eyes went black and she saw a house in the woods a zombie grabbed her then a cave. When bell got home her mom told her to get suagr from the wally's bell go sceared because she had a vison of her in the woods with a zombie and the wallys live in front of woods. Bell went in to the woods her heart beat faster and faster every step she takes she stop she saw the same house she saw in her vison she smelled something that smell like a dead body she turned around slowly and saw a zombie she was pariliz with fear " hello im gilberto im here to kill'' said the zombie. The zombie grabbed bell she looked at the zombie next she knew she telaported in a house she locked the door and sat on the bed she flicked on the light and the bed started to move then went stright down the bed stopped she was in a cave. She went to the computer and clicked on her name a video started to play '' hey bell if your watching this you got the ring that ring has the power to telaport and tell the future you are chosen you need to get every one on this and be a team to take down the evil that well stop the bad future from happening'' said the video. Bell grabbed the list and left the cave and went on her mission to save the future.

plz right a commnet how the book is going and tell me what i should put in it. thx