Lost in your world

Introduction

Hey guys I would really like support on what I need to do better on or feedback same thing cause I really want to make this good as possible 💗
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.Jenni Mack (black female)main character 1
.Aiden Roy(white male)main character 2
.Alano Rodríguez(Puerto rican male)side character 1 {for now}
.Elizabeth white(white female)side character
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-𝓲𝓷𝓽𝓻𝓸𝓭𝓾𝓬𝓽𝓲𝓸𝓷-
Jenni is a highschooler who recently changed (because of no progress)therapist and this therapist had a more of a impact than her past therapist