Another Chance(Captain America and Peggy Carter)

A Story Inside A Story

Back in 21st century
During the 2014, Steve had fought with his best friend Bucky. However Bucky was brainwashed and was brought to Tony and Banner by Steve when Bucky is at the museum.

"Stark, Banner, I have a job for you." Fury said over the phone. "Your mission is helping the winter soldier with his memory. Recover it, and bring him to our side."
"But..."
"That's is all. And here's the file. Goodbye."
Steve enters the room with Bucky. Steve looked like he just survived a bomb except there's no dusts on his face.
"Hello Cap." Banner greeted.
"Dr. Banner."
"So this is the winter soldier huh?" Tony asked.
He was looking at a person who's asleep.
"Is he ok?"
"Oh. Yes. He just fainted because there's too many people surrounding him. Mostly girls."
"So he fainted because if fan girls? Why? How come you're fine?" Tony wondered.
"One fan tries to get my autograph and throw a pen at me. But it accidentally hit Bucky. And, can't you see that my hair is messy and my jacket is ripped?"
"Haha. That's just s-so funny. A master assassin is knocked by a p-pen." Tony almost fall while he laughed. Even Banner laughed too.
"Let's just get started with the mission."
"You know, for an old fellow like you, it's not weird that you don't seem old at all due to the serum. But for your 'friend', the winter solider, it's kind of creepy." Tony said
"Well, if they kept you on ice for 70 years, I'm sure you'll look the same."
"So he is brainwashed. Maybe we can conduct electricity to him?"
"Oh we can act the scene that's during the war."
"Or we can erase his memories and tell him what happened."
"We can try all!"
And they did. but nothing works. In fact, Bucky got angry over Tony, he broke Tony's right hand and destroyed the bar area in the Stark tower.
"Not my part." Tony whined
"One last try. If this can't work, then we quit."
This method works. Bucky remembers everything. But when he asked about it again, the crew went quite.
"Um, it goes like this... Dr. Banner please continue." Steve started it.
"Well, we... Tony you can finish it."
Flashback
"One last try. If this can't work, then we quit."
"Here's the medicine. I'll inject it into your arm." Tony explained as he inject it into Bucky. But before he can leave...
"Metal Man!" Thor and the other avengers arrived. He rushed in and jumped on Tony. Tony couldn't keep his balance so he fell and kissed Bucky--------------on his cheeks.
"Please tell me I didn't kiss anybody?" Tony said.
the crowd went laughing.
"Stark, I'm sorry but you did." Steve told Tony with a poker face, and went back laughing immediately.
"DAMN IT! THOR! YOU BETTER WATCH YOUR BACK BECAUSE I'M GOING TO AVENGE IT!!!!!" Tony yelled.
"I didn't know you had it in you." Barton joked.

Is this bad? I made this chapter because I need to think about the storyline for the actual story. Any ideas?