My Hero Academia Idea 5 - "Save Me!"

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Situation

Touya "kidnapped" by Overhoul as a child (original plot idea from "DABILUVBOT" - original story canceled/deleted)


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Plot

ð Touya and Shoto only 4 years apart

o Fuyumi either Touya's twin or does not exist with Natsuo

ð Touya cannot control Quirk

o Activates itself only with strong emotions + flames (blue) appear randomly on his body (is fire-resistant for a few minutes?)

o Is so strong that even father can hurt

ð Chisaki tricked him into following him (13 years old + half white hair)

o Enji gave up training with him (after 10 years) --> concentrated on Shoto

o Rei is repellent + winces when he suddenly comes into the room or speaks to her (shortly before she collapses) + pushed she himself away because he wants to train

o Chisaki (10 years older than Touya) has been observing for a long time + recognized the potential of Touya's quirk (wants to make bullets from it #as with Eri)

ð After a few months flees from Yakuza headquarters (experiments have been carried out on him) + is "caught" again

o Chisaki has allowed escape + Touya driven into alleys

o Touya runs in low Villans (want to take advantage of the situation #lonely + cautious looking child) + Touya panics --> unintentionally activates Quirk

o Watching under horror how villains burn alive and turn to ashes + vomits (>... He stumbled backwards and landed roughly on his bottom, but he only noticed this incidentally. He watched with sheer horror as the men were burned to death. No matter how hard he wanted, he could not avert his gaze. They screams echoed in his ears, while the all too familiar smell of burnt flesh rose to his nose. ...<)

o Chisaki appears behind him + says this is the reason why it would be better to go back with him (danger to others + he the only one who is able to prevent something like this from happening #even if it is painful) + asks whether believe, that family (especially his hero father) still wants to have something to do with him now that he is a murderer à Touya goes with him again

ð He is experimented with for years + Chisaki "trains" him

o Can with a few words stir Touya so emotionally that Quirk activates (first and foremost fear)

o Touya has to wear quirk suppressing bracelets when not in use (there is no key = Chisaki uses Quirk to put on and take off?)

ð Chisaki gets another interest in Touya (15/16 years + hair completely white) #underage #rape

o First obey (has learned otherwise more pain + panics & tries to escape from the room when realizes what Chisaki is up to)

o Chisaki strokes/runs his hand through Touya's hair after IT and says will be the only one in the future who will call him by his name (Touya gets an alias: Dabi) + will dye his hair so that he can come to jobs --> Touya is used as a weapon #Chisaki's doll

o Do IT with Touya when he wants + is more brutal as punishment

o ?Give him drugs now and then to relax? (Not too much to get high or addicted to)

ð Touya/Dabi is 17 when Eri is brought to the headquarters + share cells (will be separated if one of them does not behave)

o Eri trusts him because they are equal (cannot control Quirk + are used by Chisaki)

o Eri knows that Chisaki forces Dabi to do evil things & that Dabi doesn't like + holds him when he has a breakdown

o Dabi reveals real name + that it has to be kept secret because Overhoul doesn't want others to call him by real name

ð Is 19 when he's on the street/allys with Chisaki & Eri + lets Eri's hand slip out of his so she can try to escape (told her to use chance to escape if she get one. Nobody can help him anymore #too much blood on his hands)

o Chisaki has persuaded him that for the society it doesn't matter whether he kills intentionally or not. Look only who owns Quirk that led to death

o Wears jacket to hide bandages and bracelets

o White hair roots are slowly becoming visible

ð Chisaki starts to lead his hands towards Touya's wrists when tries to collect Eri again

o Eri and Touya in panic because they know what Chisaki is up to (use shock for heroes (Izuku & Mirio) and pain from Touya to get rid of them)

o The sleeve of Touya's jacket slips briefly up --> Izuku sees bracelets and part of bandages

ð Sir NightEye sees Quirk using crying/scared Eri, who is being held and comforted by Touya before both look scared/intimidated at the opening door

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