Victoria's pov
I got to my hut and went inside to store the meat, once I was dome I sat down breathing heavily, then there was a knock on the door. " did I forget something kyra." I yelled as I made my way to the door I opened it and froze when I saw indra, anya, and Lincoln my old seconds, and niylah and emori who I met when they were young and helped them, luna who I've kept a secret from all her life, echo who i also trained but in azgeda and some other people.
While I'm frozen in place shocked indra starts by saying " Seda we finally found you." that's enough to snap me out of shock " I'm sorry who are you." I said trying to act like I didint know and stepped outside in front of her. She looks me in the eye and grabs my arm pulling up my sleeve to reveal my bonding tattoo then says " Oso get in em 's Yu seda Yu Yu don bonding tattoo kom when Yu bonded gon Leksa." She said and I sighed.
(Translation- We know it's you Seda you have the bonding tattoo from when you bonded to lexa.)"What are you doing here indra."i said a little bit above a whisper. "Lexa misses you we all do she knew you weren't dead we have been looking for you ever since you left, but when skaikru came they helped us find you now. Come back to polis to lexa." She said almost desperately. I replied with a stern no, and turned around then what she said next made me know I would go back. " fine don't go back for lexa, but go back just long enough to protect her from the ice queen." She said. Fine I replied and said we leave in one hour.
One hour later
Let's go well get there in three days I said and they nod.
Later that night
Victoria's pov
Octavia is trying to start a fire " anya can I trust these people." I ask and she says yes. "Octavia get back now" I say and she does I light a fire ball and through it at the pile of wood to start the fire.
How did you do that Octavia asks wide eyed " it's a secret" I say as I sit on a log that has fallen. " so did you really train indra, anya and Lincoln." Octavia asks yes I did and I trained echo. I also saved emori and helped niylah's family when she was young but they won't remember because I took the memories they had of my out of there head." I said and she looked dumbfounded. "Seda she wants to ask you a question she's just scared." Indra says "would you teach me some things like you taught the rest." Octavia asked quietly. Maybe I replied and went to my spot to sleep.
Should I do chapters on Victoria's past with each person or put memories throughout different chapters Should I give lexa a surprise in the next chapter or not.
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The Immortal and The Commander
FanfictionAfter two thousand year of being alone and full of darkness Victoria had found a family in the kids she trained and the love of her life. Then something happens and she leaves, but for an immortal leaving isint forever when she's found and returns.