Unexpected Visitor

Encounter

It was Hinata's day off and she was walking around the village hoping to bump into a certain blonde. She started from two in the afternoon and by now it was seven. She sighed and headed towards her house, 'Where could he be?' She thought. A hundred thoughts ran through her head and they all ended up with him being in trouble.

The sun was starting to go down and she suddenly stopped and looked around. She was completely alone, this path only she knew, she always walked here just to kill time and think about him. Then it hit her, why was she still here. Should she go check for him one more time?

'..wouldn't he do the same for me? B-But.. I'm over-exaggerating.. I didn't even check his home.. I should've done that first if I r-really wanted to b-bump into h-him..' She kept scolding herself thinking of how he was with Sakura on that dream date he was always asking for.

He was the Village hero now, he could be with any girl he wanted. In fact, every girl wanted him. They would jump at the chance to just be with him.

Why couldn't she be more brave? Why couldn't she be bold and just ask him out on a date herself? She felt her eyes water. What didn't she have that Sakura did? She confessed to him, they holded hands in the war, she put her life on the line for him! A tear dropped. Followed by more, and more tears.

She cried more finally accepting that she never had a chance with him to begin with. Since the beginning, it was always 'Sakura, Sakura, Sakura' where was she in the sentence? Why was he such an idiot sometimes..

She tried wiping her tears but they were quickly replaced. Over and over again. A rustle in the bushes was heard.

"Oi.. Stop crying would ya?" She suddenly stopped and looked up. She recognized that voice, it sounded rougher though, like they just woke up. She widened her eyes when she realized who was walking in front of her. Naruto-Kun?

No.. This one had longer, blacker hair.. And his whiskers were deeper.. He was also shirtless.. She felt a blush grow on her cheeks. He looked built. She couldn't help but wonder if this is how Naruto would look like if he were.. Shirtless. He looked like he hadn't slept in days, coming out of the bushes like that.

When he finished rubbing his eyes he looked at whoever was crying but only saw a silhouette. From the figure he could see she had curves. He licked his mouth and walked closer.

"Whats a pretty lady like you crying out here for?" He walked closer and stopped when he saw who he was talking to. He started panicking and backing away slowly. 'S-Shit! It's Nata! Wait.. Why is she crying?' He'd never seen this before, in his world, Nata was always strong and would kick any guys ass if they came near her like he just did.

He decided to take his chances. "Why're you crying?" He came closer slowly taking cautions. He didn't wanna get raped. He studied her, she was the same, but more covered up, she didn't show her huge jugs, her sweater covered them, much to his disappointment, she wasn't wearing those hot mini-shorts, she was wearing sweats that covered everything. She looked more.. Innocent.

"Nata?" He looked at her with a curious gaze, which she returned. "N-Naruto-Kun?" He raised an eyebrow 'N-Naruto-Kun?' Why was she acting so shy? Stuttering? Where was her confident voice? Her boldness? And who the fuck was this Naruto? She would never forget his name. Wait. Naruto? The one who came from a parallel universe? 'The one who beat me? That idiot?!'

He studied her looking at her from head to toe noticing she was blushing, Nata never blushed. He walked closer. "Why're you crying?" He asked again. He waited for a response. "I.. B-because.. Y-you.. W-who are y-you?" She suddenly got into a fighting stance and he backed away doing the same.

"Listen, I don't want to fight you." He said sighing. "T-then.. W-who are you?" She asked getting out of her stance making him relax and do the same. "Menma. Now who are you?" He asked crossing his arms.

Menma? She'd never heard of anyone named Menma. He could be Naruto's twin, he couldn't have been from another village.. Or maybe Naruto did have a twin.. She snapped from her thoughts and replied nervously, "H-Hinata."

Hinata? She had the 'Nata' inside.. But if she was HInata, where was Nata? They had complete opposite personalities, he was pretty sure this wasn't Nata. Then.. Where was he? 'Am I.. In that idiots universe!?' He looked at Hinata once more, 'maybe.. This could be fun..'

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Well! What do ya think? Is third person better or first person? I'm going towards first. Umm, I guess this is enough for the first chapter.
I will update my other stories soon, I feel I could've done better
Naruto: But?
Me: That's it.
Naruto: Hey! when am I gonna be in the story!?
Me: Next chapter. *wink* it'll be a surprise entrance.