Omg, I just realized how cringy this was-
Low-key since it was one of my first stories, I think I didn't do half as bad with the concept. It was just the way it was written that made it cringe. For example: Sans could use his magic to teleport out of the room. Instead I did this: panic, get pinned down, magic attack, magic attack, magic attack, get drugged, and pass out. Not just that but the constant use of run-on sentences in the story. You get it by now.
Extra Information:
Am I discontinuing this story? Yes.
Will I do a remake? Most likely not.
May I post this on r/FanficCringe? Yes you can, I don't mind.
Can I use this as an example of what not to do? Yes, yes you may.
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Scp-5083 (Sans The Skeleton) -Discontinued-
Mystery / ThrillerFrisk freed you and the others from the underground a year ago. You were walking home from the store with a bag for of groceries and ketchup. All of a sudden everything goes black and the nexting thing you know you wake up in a containment cell at s...
