Hii so this is my first book and if you could take a look and read the first chapter and tell me what you think that would be very much appreciated:)
(Also I don't have a title so maybe you could give me some suggestions)
BEEP, BEEP, BEEP, BEEP went my obnoxiously loud alarm clock, I groaned I hated getting up in the morning I wish I could just fall asleep and never wake up. I wish I never had to get up and face hell or what normal people call it, school. After about 15 minutes I finally scraped up enough willpower and hulled myself out of my creeky bed and dragged myself into my attached bathroom. As I gazed into my mirror I felt sick to my stomach. Everything about me was disgusting and dull, my ugly pale skin was covered in cuts, bruises, and many more scars and sores. part of these cuts and bruises from my brute of a stepfather and the other portion of them were from me. I know this might be weird to think but I kinda liked the look of my cuts the way they littered the uttermost of my forearm the way that some of them were white and some of them were light pink or bright red indicating that they are brand new. I had pale dull brown eyes that had darkly colored bags hanging just below my eyes from the lack of sleep I normally got. And I had greasy short dark hair that had split ends due to me not taking proper care of my hair. I had disgusting thighs that touched each other and jiggled when I ran. And big fat ankles. Neither of these things I could get rid of, not matter how much I exercised or how little I ate if I even ate at all. It was all just pointless I mean one day we are all going to die one way or another, either from natural causes or from yourself or something or someone else. But then again if I did kill myself I would be leaving the one person who actually cared about me. Gabriella pine also known as Gabbi. she was the only person in the entire world that actually cared about me. She had beautiful long luscious brown hair, tan skin and with dark green forest eyes that you could stare into for an eternity. As I finished looking into my bathroom mirror and turned away and started to strip, taking my clothes off one by one and turning on the taps until it was the perfect temperature and I hoped in. And as soon as my scared skin touched the hot water I hissed out in pain from the warm water coming in contact with my new raw cuts. I quickly turned the temperature down and proceeded to wash my hair and clean my body. After I had finished my shower I quickly brushed my teeth and hair and got dressed
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The clothes she put on^
And hurriedly packed my bag and silently creeped down the hall as to not awaken my sleeping mother and stepfather. And quietly opened the door and slipped out. And started to make to walk myself down the stairs and out of the building. After about 10 minutes of walking I finally reached the front gates of my high school. And I stalked in and to my locker and put my bag away and got my books for my first class. "HEY BITCH." as I spun around I spotted Gabbi running full speed at me. "Hey." I said and for the first time today I actually smiled a genuine smile. "What class do we have first?" Gabbi asked while she put her bag in her locker and got her books as well. "Maths." I said as Gabbi groaned in annoyance "ughh seriously what the fuck!" Gabbi exclaimed I just rolled my eyes at her and looked at her fondly. Just then the first bell rang signalling to go your class. As me and Gabbi walked into our classroom for maths we saw Mackenzie Moore sitting in the back row with her 'friends' "hey slut." she called out as her fan club giggled I looked down suddenly all the happiness that I had felt earlier on had disappeared and my emotions were now replaced with a sad, cold and bitter interior I felt like a dementor from Harry Potter had just sucked my soul right out of my throat. Great I thought just fucking great i quickly put my head down a started to walk to my seat. Gabbi was glaring at Mackenzie and her little fleet of flying monkeys furiously "don't worry, people like Mackenzie won't get very far in life if they keep up that attitude." she said as her and I sat into our seats. Just then the second bell went and in came out maths teacher mrs white came in and sat down and started talking to the class immediately "ok class settle down please." She said after everyone got quiet only then did she continue "ok so today we are going to be doing section B to D in your text book and then if you finish that you can continue on with any unfinished work in any of your other classes, But first let me do the roll." "Max." "here." "Zoe." "here." "Evangeline." "here." "Mackenzie." "here miss." the teacher said a few more names until she got up to my name "milli." "here miss." I said quietly. After mrs white finished saying everybody's name she clapped her hands and said "ok everyone you know what to do, get to work!" And so we did after about 10 minutes of doing the work in the text book Gabbi started to get bored and so obviously she decided to annoy me for her entertainment. "Milli, Milli,Milliiiiii." she sang quietly but still annoyingly. I groaned in frustration "what do you want!?" I snapped at her all she did was grin back and say "oh nothing I just really wanted to annoy you, is it working?" " yes now go away." as I tried to push her away. After Gabbi started to actually do her work, time started to fly past and before we all knew it the bell for recess went. "YESSSSS FINALLY." Gabbi yelled out in delight "Gabriela please use your inside voice." snapped mrs white "hehe oops sorry miss." Gabbi said guiltily looking. I laughed a little as me and Gabbi walked out of the classroom together.
Words~1054 Hii everyone who is reading this I hoped you liked the new chapter:)
