Ok Guys

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Ok guys, I know this first chapter was proably considered short but before i continued on with it i just wanted to know what people thought. Should i continue, does it seem like a good story? I know there are alot of grammatical errors and i have every intention of going back and fixing them, just wanted to put it out there first to receive some feedback. 

How do you guys feel about Dixie and Beau?

What about Jessa? ( I love her he-he) 

I know J.J. Watt is a football player ( go texans) but he just fit the vison i had of stearling so well

what do you guys think about the actors i have in place? 

I'm also in the process if setting up a playlist for each chapters, because who doesnt like music

what do you guys think would be some good song selections?

I have so much in my mind for these characters, like i said i know it doesnt seem like alot but i am new and still learning :) 

I hope yall enjoyed it thus far

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