Author Notes (Made while writing)

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I'm gonna tell you my exact thoughts here (Well.. at least as good as i remember them at least. Also translated since. well.. i'm german)

Sex scene writing day one: Shit. I'm already on day late and i'm still stuck at this fucking scene. I don't even know how to write this! Should i use things like dick and pussy, or should i use penis and vagina... So annoying.

Sex sene writing day two: Ok you know what? Fuck it?! I don't care if i'm getting hated for this. I'm just gonna youse dick and pussy! Now the question is. How to write? Should i still countinue with the writing form i used up till now, or should i only write down their thoughts and what they say. No, that's stupid. How am i supposed to say what's heppening then?... *sigh* that's so frustrating.

Sex scene writing day three: well... that's a start. now i only need to not overdo it and make it readable... Here goes nothing.

Scrap that. That's awefull *deleting around 200 words* aaaand again.

That's even worse *deleting around 300 words again* and antoher one.

That's... not to bad. I'll keep that *saving around 300 words (Finally)*

Sex scene writing day four (The day where i started this thoughts thingy(May 31st)): Ok... so now i just need to write the actual scene cause i already did the forplay. That's... gonna be fun. or maybe not. Let's go.

Well. Today was some good progress. I guess that's enough. Now let's go for the rest.

After sex scene writing day one: So... how should i start? I don't want to go to the pregnancy test right away, but rather want something unrelated to happen before that...

After sex scene writing day two: Ok. how should i do this? I'll just go straight for the prgnancy and the birth. If i would go into detail, i would probably take two more days and i'm already late.

Ok done! It's not as good as i hoped it would turn out, but it's still good. Now only the author notes on the end and saying thanks here.



Hey there. Thank you for reading. And i'm sorry for being later then said. I was stuck at the sex scene for four days and started writing later then i pllaned too, so i kind of fucked up a little. Since Rimuru and Milim have special character traits, i found it hard sometimes to write something they would actually say, but i think it was okay. The end felt a little rushed, and i know that. But if i would've made it longer i would probably want to write so much that it would delay the release to friday, and i really don't want that to happen.

I'm happy with the ending, and with the whole story itself since i expected it to be really bad.

If you still think it's bad, please send me a message and tell me what you did, and what you didn't like, so i can to better in my next storys. 


Once again, tahnk you so much for reading and being patient, and now have a wonderfull day.

BYE

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