Pt.1

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Eduardo's POV

My name is Eduardo Gomez and I work for a strict company that's like nasa except lower quality. I've been here since I got out of college, so about 20 years. I'm 36 and I've worked here with my friend Markus since the beginning of the company. Lately it's been getting rough and the company expects more from us yet they haven't gotten anything done for the worker insurance or paychecks. I have only been payed maybe six times in the past few years, that's why I've gotten a side job for nights. They want us to work harder so me and Markus have been doing our own little projects since we finish our work pretty quickly. I did not need my chemistry or robotics degree to man a machine.

It's been a few years since I've started my project and mark knows nothing of it. I'm building a robot, I programmed it to feel like humans do. Hell it practically is a human. He looks the part, I've named him Jon. He's going to be my partner, someone to help me out with all of the work needing to be done around here. I've been spending all my lunch breaks back here working on him. Mark asked where I was a few weeks ago and I shrugged it off saying I had something to do. It's not a complete lie.
Ok. Five years of work and I think he's finished. His pale vanilla skin softly glows with the dim light. I flip the power switch and...

Jon's POV
What's going on? What is this? I look around and notice I'm in a dimly lit room, it smells like chlorine and Diet Coke in here. I look up to notice a man who's about two feet taller than me, he looks happy. "Who are you?" I asked the strange man. His brown hair lays messily on his head, sweat coating it and making some of the hair stick. The scans of this room show that it's 23°. Humans should be fine in that right? Yeah, over 30° is how hot it has to be to have a heat stroke. The man was smiling at me and he puts his arms around me. Hugging me close to him. He looks me in the eyes. "My name is Dr.Gomez. I'm the one who created you, do you know your name?" He looks at me curiously. My sensors showed a profile. My profile. "Jon Richmond. Age 29, Sex Male." I read off what I see. Is this really me? Dr.Gomez nods "good. Now can you move?" Can I move? I...can I? I look down at my body and I start to move my legs attempting to walk, I stumble for a bit until he catches me. "Thank you doctor.. I think I got the hang of it now." Dr. Gomez smiles slightly and let's me go as I begin to walk around.

Eduardo's POV

He's moving! It worked!! I made an artificial life form that replicates the human form!! This is gonna be perfect. "Jon, it's time to go. I have a task I want you to do." The boy looks up at me curiously, he's beautiful. Wait- beautiful? Is that how I see him? Yes, my dearest Jon. My greatest creation. He holds all the beauty and perfection that you could ever imagine, and I've grown attached already. I mean- I didn't waist, what? Five years? Yeah, five years and three months. I wanted to make sure he was flawless. That's exactly what he is to me. Flawless perfection.

(Hello! This is my first ever story I've written that I've actually had the balls to make public. I'm new to the writing but I've used Wattpad for years and I know how mean some people can be but if they bother being like that then I'm willing to keep writing. I've made so many stories and characters so I'm not new to this but I'd like to know others feedback on this story! I made this universe a few minutes ago and I'm absolutely in love with it!! Let me know if you like it and I'll make another chapter!!
-Cole)

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