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Here are the songs I'm writing due to a heartbreak, I feel a bit extreme with the lyrics of the first one but it's fine😂

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Song#1: Suffocate

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by Jey-0325

by Jey-0325

Verse1:
you said I was great, amazing, inspiring
all you ever gave me was praise
you looked my way
and i was no longer alone

vocals

but then, things got tough
you decided it was to much, and that I was not good enough
You left me alone, no home to go
all i can feel is hate
and so betrayed

Chorus:
and now im drowning in my own skin
drowning in my own lake
that you helped me create
oh, this eternal hate, it must be fate
I hope that you, suffocate

vocals

Verse 2:
now im still alone no one to hold,
cause you broke my glass heart
its a beautiful sad piece of art,
that you created made it hatrid
how can you be so calm,
your damn rational thinking left me here bleeding, and all you could think about were your feeling
but what about me, and what you said that we would be

Chorus:
and now im drowning in my own skin drowning in my own lake
that you helped me create
oh this eternal hate, it must be fate,
I hope that you suffocate
(hold suffocate note)

I hope that you suffocate,
I know it may seem harsh
But it seems necessary in my mind
Cause you just left me behind(hold)

I'm tired of drowning in my own skin, drowning in my own lake
That you helped me create
Oh this eternal hate it must be fate
I hope that you suffocate (hold and use harmonizing note)

Bridge:
Im glad you showed your true colors
before we took things to far, diving off the deep end
now i can breath some
but suffocation hasnt left my lungs
im still beaten up

and how i wish you could leave my mind
leave all this suffocating behind
and then id no longer cry
wish we could erase our time

Chorus:
Because Im still drowning in my own skin drowning in my own lake,
that you helped me create,
oh, this eternal hate, it must be fate,
I hope that you suffocate

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So fun fact, I have always wanted to write a song but never could because idk, I guess no one had ever broken me like the person this song is about. So on the day they decided to leave me, I wrote this. Hope you enjoyed.