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by liltjaywifeyy

by liltjaywifeyy

Ummm 🤨 why in most of y'all books ,nbayoungboy books at that he always gotta be disrespectful to everybody but the gurl he finna date ?😒 y'all books be like
Drea : I'm pregnant kentrell
Kentrell : bitch get the fuck out my face you fucking thot bitch hoe cunt slutty musty rat that ain't my baby
When he know damn well they was fucking around 🤡
Like damn why he gotta be so disrespectful? He need some Home training cus that ain't cute the way y'all think it is 🥴 . then he do allat just to treat her ( the main character) the same way ! But he regretted it because he got a soft spot for her and she the only mf that ever cared about him and that's wifey like nooo baby he had some good people in his life before she ain't that special 👩🏽‍🦲

MOVING ON!!!

Why the gurl gotta be a bully ? Or have a stank attitude?🥴 like the bitch just be rude for no damn reason (prime example)
Iyanna: hi my name yaya
The main character : umm ok ?
( her thoughts) she ugly asf and annoying asf short ass bitch I don't know why kentrell date her she act like a kid

Like Bitch you just met her 🤡 got damn 🤨 just be hating on people you don't even know 🙄 but as soon as somebody do the same thing to the main character they wrong -

and another example 👇🏽
The teacher: can you pls sit down
The main character: bitch you don't run me tf you sit down with that stiff ass wig

Like GURLL yo mama ain't teach you how to talk to adults? Bitch you only 16 🤡 sit yo fast ass down 🙄
And then they swear every girl hate them because of a nigga or they NEVER lost a fight 😭
The hater : bitch I'll slap you if you talk to my nigga again
Main character: bitch pls I'll drag you
( they start fighting)
"I slapped her in her face then knocked out her teeth and pulled all her hair out and the teachers still ain't got me off of her so I pulled out my gun and shot her in the face 50 times and her friends jumped in so I killed everybody at school "

LIKE BITCH you know that ain't happen 🤣🤣🤣
At lest make it seem real 🙄 and then baby never go to jail like wtf ? Yb killed 30 people and still walking around this bitch free asf ? Like no 🤡 baby would have had death penalty rn🥴
AND THEN !!! let's not forget this one
the girl be SOOO mean to him but as soon as he returns the Energy he wrong ? Like hell no she was just talking about that man dead grandma 🤡 same thing goes for the best friend tew !!!
she telling her best friend that she wrong for dating a nigga with a girlfriend like she ain't get pregnant by a nigga with a girl tew ? At that when you and kentrell first started talking I could have sworn him and jania was dating ☕️ But as soon as the bestie tell her the truth about her self she a snake bitch ? Like what y'all make y'all main characters so rude like why can't she be civilized ? She can still be a hood bitch with some respect for her peers 😄

BUT BASICALLY WHAT IM SAYING IS MAKE YALL BOOKS REALISTIC ( I'm not hating on all either I'm just giving tips 😊) AND IF YOU THINKING ABOUT MAKING A BOOK PLS DONT ADD EVERYTHING I LISTED ! BC THE BOOK WILL BE DRY AND LOOK LIKE EVERYBODY ELSE STUFF 🛺 and what I mean by saying it will look l like everybody else stuff is when y'all be making them wanna be hood books 🙂 like he killed a policeman and all he had to say was " clean this up " and they got away with murder ? Like NOOO tf LMAOO body cameras just don't exist huh ? He a crip but don't know what hood he from - then he claim he got connections ? Pls if he got connections then why he still got opps ? I mean to have connections you have to be cool with everybody 🤥
And don't say I'm putting to much thought in it 🙄 because this is Just my opinion 😮‍💨

I'm done tho 👩🏽‍🦲💋💋🖤🖤✨✨ Finna make my own book tew guys so read it 🚌

Peace y'all 🚘
* in my Jessica the coolest voice 🤥🖤*

— QUEEN 💅🏽