"Ohhhh!""What a big bird! Ace and Sabo will love it!" Luffy cried when he spotted a giant bird preening in a tree. He didn't want to burden his brothers so Luffy tried to climb the 60 feet tree by himself to get the bird for lunch. Halfway up the tree Luffy's foot slipped."AAAAAHHHHHHHHH!!!"
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Ace's Point of ViewI was a little worried about letting Luffy leave the treehouse by himself.He was already 8 but I was still really uneasy about it. Me and Sabo were just taking a stroll through the forest looking for lunch. " Hey Sabo," " Yeah?" "Did you think it was a good idea to let Luffy go by himself?" " Your such a worrywart Ace,he'll be fine, he's a big boy after all" "Rigggghhtttt......" Ace said not believing Sabo a bit. They continued walking in silence, when a piercing scream broke the calm atmosphere. "AAAAAHHHHHHHHH!!!" That's Luffy's voice! " Let's go Sabo!"
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