Chapter 1
3rd Person POV
Off the coast of dawn island a pirate ship approaches. The ship belongs to Charlotte D. Loki son of Charlotte Smoothie, and grandson to Big Mom one of the four yonkos or also known as the emperors of the seas. Loki's father was the infamous revolutionary Monkey D. Dragon. The reason Loki was heading to dawn island or to be more specific Foosha Village. Loki had gotten a letter from his father about a month ago. The letter said he had a younger half brother named Luffy. His fathe4r had told him where to find his brother. As he was docking He had seen to other ships, one being a Marine ship, and the other being Red-Hair Shanks ship the Red Force. After seeing the ships Loki knew he had to be careful when he got on to the island. As he was leaving his ship he saw the villagers stare with fear in their eyes upon seeing the Big Mom Pirate flag on the ship. Then you saw one of Red-Hair Shanks crew members spot you and started to run to a bar. As the crew member got into the bar He was screaming boss. Red-Hair turned around and said "what's wrong" the crew member replayed with "Big-Big Mom Pirates are here." The bar turned silent as Red-Hair got up and started to exit the bar. His first mate asked "Boss where are you going." He turned around with a big smile on his face and said "I'm going to meet our guest." Just as he was about to walk out the door Loki enter the bar. Loki and Red-hair stared at each other and then Red-hair spoke. "who are you" then Loki replayed with "Names Charlotte D. Loki." Realized who was in front of him. It was the Grand son of Big Mom. Finally asked "Does anyone know where i can find Monkey D. Luffy." "Who are you to Luffy" the bar owner asked. Loki replayed with "I'm his half-brother." silence once again filled the bar. Everyone's mouth hit the floor. The bar owner that was now known as Makino offer to take you to him.
Time skip
Loki's POV
As you approach a hut in the jungle you here yelling. Just as you get close you see two kid and a older man in a marine uniform. They then notice you and Makino as the do the older man looked at you and then at Luffy. He asked who i was. You then handed him the letter and his eyes pop out of his skull. You walked past him up to the two kid. You asked which one was Luffy. The one that looked similar to you but with black hair. He then asked who i was. You replayed with "I'm your half-brother." Luffy immediately launched at you raping his arms around your body crashing into you in a bone crushing hug. You then found out that the older man was your grandfather. He then asked you who your mother was. You then started to sweat and he saw this. He asked you again and you found the courage and said that your mother was Charlotte Smoothie one of Big Moms sweet commander. He then tried to give you a Fist of Love. But with you observation haki you saw this coming and dodged it. He saw that you used haki and smiled. You then noticed that the sun was going down you had said your goodbyes but Luffy did not want you to leave so what you did was give him a transponder snail to contact you when ever he wanted. Then he said something that made you smile he said he was going to be King of the pirates. You then responded with that when he set out onto the sea and need help contact him and he will be their for him. As you stand on you ship you wave goodbye to Luffy. Just as dawn island was out of sight your transponder snail rang and you known that it was your mother calling, you answer and she asked how it went and you say it went great and told her you were where heading back to whole cake island. You then look at the moon wondering what will happen next.
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