Mlp series #1 The outtake

Arrival

 
The the next moment I fell out of the Portal feeling a little dizzy. I felt weird like another type of being. I decided to look what I look like. I was pretty sure maybe it was just in my head or I was in a dream. "Ouch!" I yelled it was real. I needed to find the paper. I looked down I had no hands! " I have hooves!" I screamed. I needed a mirror quick so I looked around. There right beside me was A town bakery that wouldnt work. I also noticed it was like a animated world like on a computer game. It was kind of scary. I kept runnkng until I ran around a corner. Luckily I could still see. " my glasses are on at least." I sighed. I finally found a restaurant and ran to the bathroom rambling through the restaurant other ponies were looking at me very weird. Maybe I was just a human scared me. I dashed into the bathroom not the ponies out of my way. Luckily no one was in the bathroom I looked in the mirror. I was a pony!!!

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