𝐂𝐨𝐮𝐧𝐭 𝐨𝐧 𝐦𝐞 ↪ 𝐓𝐨𝐤𝐲𝐨 𝐑𝐞𝐯𝐞𝐧𝐠𝐞𝐫𝐬 𝐱 𝐉𝐉𝐊

read this if u understand

I'm sorry if the grammars is shit cause English is not my first language and also for the slow updates.

I don't want to make a x reader cause it gets confusing like I pronounced y/n as y n (letter by letter) or sometimes yin/yen. These are the one of the problems I noticed when I read fanfics nowadays. unlike the 2019-2020 one.

(kahit panget rin naman akin pero hayaan na lang natin xoxo)

First, The personality, yes, that's the main problem in making a xreader fanfic like who would have a personality like this "u-uh, s-senpai...!" if there's some stuttering about being shy or some shit and not because their surprised or in shock makes me vomit and get secondhand embarrassment. (I enjoyed it sometimes too)

Second, the smut scenes, why would y'all include a smut scene in a story
I— I enjoyed it but why? Why? When 2020, the fanfics really expressed the plot but ngayon lahat may smut scene, ano ba? 😭😭 ilagay niyo na lang sa mga oneshot o boyfriend scenarios. Tapos puro reverse harem, why? At least make y/n or m/n, main character have a character improvement puro kayo love wala naman sa plot yung iba but your stories are really good.

Third, the plot, the first chapter should be done in slow like scene, don't make the character experience a disaster in the first chapter, especially meeting the supposed to be main character and then becoming friends, then feelings. Ano ba? Pero maganda rin kaso first chapter pa lang. May crush na agad? Love at first sight, like at least have some moments first. (ganon ako sa crush ko eh, enebe)

Third, chapter, please if ur making a fanfic at least make it longer nakakairita eh, like 8th chapter magcoconfess agad ano yon? Tapos na fanfic wala na tapos hiatus na ng 7 months or so😀

The character y/n that is really chaotic, the one who always joke around and getting push around. Most y/n's personality is chaotic, like ano puro happy lang? Walang sad? Diba pag y/n na chaotic dapat masaya lang tapos yung best friend naiirita sa personality niya at lagi siyang pinapagalitan no like I ain't even doing anything, at least have some angst that include y/n tapos magiging guilty sila, dapat ganon puro y/n na chaotic amp tapos may abusive parents o patay na like wtf? At least make them have a mental breakdown. Then dapat may grudge then puro sorry, nakakairita, mukha ba tayong madaling nagpatawad? Magsuffer muna kayo bago namin kayo patawarin. (sadistic much? Basta totoo yun)

Y/n is a really happy child na  mentally retarded making them a chaotic child and never really seen with sad expression, y'all should add some little sad scenes when making a chaotic fanfic, it may have funny scenes but what is a story without hardships, never really encountered that kind of story.

I might publish a chapter later or tomorrow if I finish it, it only have 1000+ words wait na lang kayo. Tsaka di pako nakakatulog, 9:42am na dito I—

Di ako makapagisip ng maayos, yung grammars Eye— i-edit ko na lang mamaya

Bigyan nyo ko ideas😭