Mixed POVS  
the girl was trying to find Luo and give him back his neckless but she couldn't find him so she  kept it around "ugh wait its so boring , oh right Imma go find Shen he might have something in mind" the girl  said and set up to find him the boy walked whit  a leaf in his hand . 
there was a really bad storm at Shuanghu town and a girl was running from a black  evil spirit "ahhh!' 
there sited Shen Qing Qiu on a rock "this jade pendant " "must be a high level item. maybe it can  save my life in the future. " thats when Yue Qing Yua started walking to him "huh" "Junior. are you feeling better after resting for a few days?" Yue Qing Yua said "I'm fine. thank you for  your concern." "alright it's almost time for you to descend the peak. do you need anything else for your trip to Shuanghu town?" "Shuanghu town?" "did you forget about it after the illness? you told me you would take care of the issue at  Shuanghu town as an opportunity to train the disciples?" "the exclamation mark on his head is Yue Qing Yua a quest-giving NPC?" [ beginner quest.] [ location, Shuanghu town.] [ Mission: investigate the serial skinning murder case] [ and  find out the truth.] "it's really user-friendly. it's better to save myself from the trouble. I'll reject it. ehh no response?" [ this option is unavailable. ] "I'm so Speechless." that's when the girl found him. 
"Shen  what you doing" "oh imma just gonna head out to Shuanghu town " "oo really can i come " the girls eyes lit up "no you can't this mission will probably be dangerous and in your conditions its worse " "but " "no buts" "please " "no " pretty please" "no " "please , please ,please" the boy sighed "fine, you can come" "yay!" after a while they seated off to Shuanghu town they were riding the carriage when  the girl felt hot since it was sunny that day 'wait I brought all my fan's for some reason " she went to her left  and tried  to find one of her fan's "y/n what are you doing?" "grabbing a fan since its so hot  " "oh ok" she finally found a fan . 
"giddy up!" the disciples yelled so the horses would move, "hmm are you kidding me? isn't this a world of wizardry? why do I have to use a horse carriage around? system don't you have anything like sword flight?" [ don't be surprised.] [even if this is a world of witchcraft, not everyone will be  riding on broomsticks.] [ otherwise, it will be to flashy] " you know your stuff. did you work in  the harry potter games as well? how many days will it take to get there? the original story didn't mention this as well." [ this is one of the ways to increase B-points. discover the hidden story line. please experience it.] "fine that's enough. I  understand. in conclusion, I have to experience everything including traveling in a horse carriage." 'ugh its so boring why did i agree i could be doing something fun at home' the girl thought as she swung her fan back in fort thats when they both heard a  feminine voice yell " master! lady! " "hmm? "  "what was that?" the girl open the window . 
they saw  Ying Ying coming towards them  "look at the seniors. there always bullying Luo. why don't  you scold them?" she said pointing at them  they looked  to the direction on were she was  pointing just to see Luo being surrounded by the seniors and surrounded by a smoke of sand. the girl could see  he was bad due to the smoke and was already coughing "if this goes on, your disciples will all be  bad people." "she has a point" the girl said  hiding half of her face whit her fan. 
"hmm. Luo Bing He. come here. " "yes." the boy said bowed and started walking to them "he will definitely suffer." Ming Fan said and the seniors laughed as soon as the boy got there the other boy jester to come in whit them. 
"what?" the seniors said in shock "Luo, come inside Shen allows you  to ride whit him." the girl said still covering her  face "thank you, master "  the boy said as he got in [ system detects a rule violation ] [ character OOC level, 100%] [ deducting  B-points] "hold it. I'm not  helping  Luo Bing He.  I'm doing this for  Nin Ying  Ying and L/n Y/n. Ying Ying is Shen  Qing  Qiu's most loved disciple and Y/n is his best friend since childhood.  how can I disappoint my beloved disciple and best friend? they  even begged me. I can't be hurting them. so, my action totally suits Shen Qing Qiu's character. the warning is  invalid."  the boy soon got in and sited down  and the carriage began to move  again. 
for most of the time was silence the boy glanced at the girl from time to time and sometimes the girl did to and in one time they even met each other gazes . thats when Shen Qing Qiu decided to break the silence, "take this." he says as he throws Luo Bing He some medicine " apply it on your wounds. I don't want others to think I'm torturing my disciples." the boy says as he closes his fan the girl just saw in amassment and proud of her best friend but whit a slight blush that was cover by her fan by just looking at Luo why was she feeling these.
was she maybe falling in love  she dismiss it thinking it was just a quick  feeling but she was wrong the boy picked up the medicine looked at it and back at his master  " thank you, master. ' he says whit a smile which made the girl stare in aww the other boy smiled back and the girl just stared in more aww  [ smiling violation character OOC level,  60%. 15 B-points deducted. current B-points, 165.] "how can you deduct  my points for a smile!"   the boy screamed the girl soon  fell asleep on the boys lap and when he notice his face went more red  then a tomato and the other boy just smirked  knowing he had a new ship he was gonna complete .

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