The day I won't forget.

The day I won't forget: When Times get hard

The last section was sorta a hanger there. That wasn't a day I won't forget. Sorry If confuseion. Leave comment about what is conffusing. Thank you for reading! Leave a comment if you want me to read one of your storyies. :)   -Rainbow777             Love is a page for guys but a chapter for girls. :) <3

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March 1st, 2010.

I got out of my car in the parking lot infront of the big mall.  I was all alone. Just me and my wallet full of money. A girl does that. Espesialy when she is depressed. I am. Alex is making me mad he is all like lets do this and lets do that. GIVE ME A BREAKE!!!!! Holy cow. Ever since that bad boy guy at school he wants me to spend every sencond with him since he thinks the kid will steal me. Nice you think? Yah no. He left me 126 messages about going somewhere alone together. I walked into the mall. I looked at the mall sign. Hot Topic was up stairs in the south. So I started my way up. So many people with bags. Dang. I got up to the top and there was the court yard. All that stupid junk food. Good and yummy but unheathly. I started to walk away when I saw Raven. My luck. Trying to get away from stupid guys. Raven waved me over. I groaned and walked over. "Hi." I said sarcasticly. "Hey babe. So what are you ding here?" He asked. "Guess." I said. "Came here to get away from Alex. Well I would. If I were you. I want him near so I can kill him."He said enjoying this horrable momment. "Yahhh. Great. Well as you can't see I am going to shop so can you excuse me." I said walking away. He caught up with me. "Can I buy you something to eat?" He asked. "Sure." I said. I was hungry by the smell of all the pizza. "Pizza would be nice." I said. A while later he came to me with saugage pizza. "I know its your favorite." He said smileing. "How?" I asked biteing into it. "Lets just say I have some resources." He laughed. "Hmhm. Ok Well how can I thank you for this Pizza.?" I asked. I stopped and new something he was about to say was gonna be bad and i would regret it.  "Yah I have something in mind" He said pulling me off. "See that ride? Its call the Wish Tunnel. We are gonna ride it together." He said. "Ok sounds fun. Are yah gonna take pictures. I hope you do and rube them into Alex's face." I said. He laughed. "what?" I asked. "I am so glad your over him. Can you start to like me now?" He asked.  "Ever since I met you I have liked you a bit Now even more." I said. He smiled. We got in line to get on the ride. "You two gonna go together?" A teenage guy asked. "Yah. Why?" Raven said. "Actully can I go with her?" The guy said. "No. Why?" Raven said suprised. I could hear them but I was buying tickets sorta far. "Since she is hot and I want to wish in the tunnel she will love me." The guy said. "Sorry No I am going with her." It all made sence now. He wants me in the tunnel to wish for my love. Dang am I stupid or what? I came over. "Raven babe. Heres your ticket." I said. He smiled and looked at the guy."Are you two dateing?" He asked. Raven looked at me. "Yah Raven and I are dateing why?" I asked. "Never mine." The guy said and walked away. Raven smiled. "No. No we are not. I haven't broken up with Alex. Well not yet." I said. We got on the ride finnally. The ride started off slow. It said to make a wish. I wished that Alex would stop being a stupid jerk and move on from Raven. Raven and I are just friends. I knew what Raven was wishing since I could see him stareing at me. I looked at him. He stiil stared at me. I smiled. He smiled back. All of a sudden a thing jumped out and a yelled and jumped next to Raven. "Why is there a jumping guy in this ride?!?!" I asked. Raven looked like he stopped breathing. I noticed I was actully sitting on him. You know. Bad boys do not stop breathing when a girl sits on them unless....... Oh my gosh. He is such a...... nvm. Ok. I smiled at him. He still had wide eyes. "Ummm you can breath right?" I asked. He nodded. He still had his eye wide open and his mouth almost in shock. He wouldn't move. I groaned and rolled my eyes. I kissed him on the lips really quick and got off of him. When Alex was sad or mad or in shock I would kiss him so I tried. Raven smiled. Why is it that everytime I kiss a guy they smile???  He leaned in for a kiss so I kissed him then I could tell he was going to put his tounge into my mouth. Well he was trying to manage to open my mouth which was gross so I pushed him back. "I still have a boyfriend." I said. "THEN DUMP HIM!!!!!" He yelled. "Gosh oh gosh. I will dumbo." I said. "NOW!!!" He yelled again. "Fine." I grabbed my cell. I dailed Alex's number. "RACHEL!!!! WHY WON'T YOU ANWER MY CALLS!!!" He yelled. "Hey calm down!" I said. "Put it on speaker." Raven wisphered. I did. "Rachel. We need to talk meet me at the mall." "Ummm. I am already there." "Yah she is!" Raven said. "Shhhush He wasn't supposed to know you were here Raven!" I yelled. "WHAT IS HE DOING THERE?!" "Hey I can go to malls also!" Raven said. "Why Rachel?" "Hey he bought me a pizze so I rode on some love rollercoaster for the sake of it!" "I am on my way!" He hung up. "Nice going there Raven." I laughed. The ride ened.

Alex got there and it began in a fight. We told each other stuff like ... well here is the conversation: "Why are you here raven!!!!" Alex yelled. "I am hanging out with your Ex.Sorry." Raven said. "Why can't I tell him I am breaking up with him?!?!" I said. "Since I am gonna be your boy friend. "Raven said. "WHAT!?!" Alex screamed. Raven got on one knee. "Awwwww." I said. "Will you be my girl friend?" He said. "Yes I will Raven." I said I kissed him and he stood up laughing. Alex punched him. Put Raven got up and stood in front of me. "He is gonna make you missabrel!!!!!!" Alex said. Alex threw another punch. "Whats that mean?!!?" I said. Raven still steped back. "He will get you pregnet! He will get you drunk he even might get you on drugs unlike me!!!" Alex said. Police came and handcuffes Alex. Some other person helped Raven wit his noes bleed.After an hour I took Raven home. To my home.I layed on my bed. Raven layed on top of me. About to kiss me. I rolled on top of him."What?" He asked calmly. "You wouldn't do any of that stuff right?" I asked. "What stuff? And would we make out already?" He said pulling my head down. He kissed me on my neck. "Would you get me pregnat or on drugs or ever drunk?" I said. He kissed my lips and stopped. "Why would you think that and no." He said.  "Ok. Well Alex said you would and-" "You would belive him?" He said mad. "No no no. Just asking. Sorry." I said. I kissed him back. Then we made out. My mom called me.I stopped and got up. "Yah mom?" I said. While i pushed Raven off the bed and helped him under my bed. My mom came in with flowers. "Can you tell me why These were on my steps?" She said. "Uhhh. Alex and I broke up." I said. "Good. He was a dork."My mom said. Raven snorted. "What was that?" "Nothing mom." "Whos under your bed?" "Why would someone be under my bed?" "Well who ever you were makeing out with should know not to leave his base ball hat on your bed." I rolled my eyes. "He is fine mom. He won't leave a mess." "Well who ever made out with my daughter better know if you get her pregnant I will kill you and that might not punish you but you will punish my daughter since she would have to rasie a kid by her self." I looked under the bed. "And thats why I asked you." I said. Raven laughed. "Nice talking non-face to face Rachels Mom." Raven said laughing when he crawled out under the bed. My mom saw him and siad "See he is much cuter than that Alex boy. I hope you do not pregant her but if you do yes you will die but you hunny will have a geouges baby." My mom walked out. "Nice Mom you got there." He laughed. "Will we ever even do "It"?" I asked. He flopped on to my bed. "Well have you done "It" before." He asked. "No." I said. I don't want to actully. Not untill I am married. Not ready yet.

 This is a day I won't forget.

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I am thinking of getting rid of raven and Alex with apoligize. What do you think???? Commment!!!!!!!!!!!! :)