20 Steps to Revenge

Chapter 1: Im back from Fat Camp

I slumped down on my room in sunnyville California. I was back home. I had just gotten back from fat camp and I mean I know that's mean to say but it's the truth. I had been at Iowa best one my parents know they actually got someone to teach me during the school days. So I had school for 4 hours and then fat camp or I could have it the other way around. Either way I suffered. "Jamie darling love the top, have you seen the rest of your closet?" My mom smiled and looked down at my light blue colored crop top and white miniskirt. I tugged on the hem of the shirt I still wasn't used to being skinny. But seeing as though I had no clothes besides the joggers and converse and tank top I arrived in I had to wear these. I jogged downstairs hoping to see if I could eat but my mom saw me and just had to say something "Sweetie are you sure you want to eat that??" she said with a scornful look. I glared over at her "I haven't eaten in 10 hours yes I'm sure mom you sent me there they taught me about eating so leave it be." I ran back upstairs ignoring her. I had to see my list. It looked well worn I saw its box but I knew its words by heart. I inhaled a shaky breath and I took it out and smoothed it over.
Step #1:

Anyways it's just a sample but I still need a story cover.......any help?Sooooo how do you like it??? I know I didn't start step number one but I'll get there. Hope you like it I know it's really short because I deleted some stuff because I wanted you to know about the list. But I think so far so good.
Would love to hear some comments!!! Love you guys!!

-J