The Red String "A Discombobulated Family"

Chapter 1(Remastered) "Demon problems"

Jamie:Ah... My-my head.. Where am I...*?* Ah...d-did I pass out...? I-I can't remember... W-wait what is that...?

Also Jamie:(approaches the bloodied door)O-oh it's.... it-it's a door... With blood.... It's locked....
Maybe-maybe there's a key... somewhere o-or--

(Bloodied door magically opens)
Still Jamie:....I...I don't like this(cautiously enters...)
Mm I don't like this....I don't like this I-I don't feel right about any.....of this ---!!!
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Jamie:(eyes dilate)
Wh-what... what's -- why is it h-here.... Why...WHY ARE YOU HERE!!!

(Nothing but a pentagram pulsing like a heart)
Jamie:... What do you want from me....?(puts his hand on the pentagram) W-why do you keep h-haunting me?
Also Jamie;M-my hand....I-I can't let go..! A-AH WHY CAN'T I LET GO*!!!* WHAT'S HAPPENING T-TO ME WHY IS MY HAND S-STUCK!

(Pulsing Pentagram starts glowing)
Jamie: O-oh god Ahhh let go of my arm P-PLEASE!! I-IT'S STARTING TO B-BURN! AAAAAAHHH--
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Timmy:Jamie wake up your dreaming again!!
Jamie:(wakes up)A-AHHH ha...haa....ah god WHY!!(covers his face) I-I can't mentally function like t-this!! I-it hurts so much Timmy!!

Timmy:(pats Jamie's back)Oh Jamie... Well if it makes you feel better dad hasn't left yet so you have a chance to say goodbye to him..*!*
Jamie:(tries to wipe his tears)G-gahh ghhn!! Ow... R-really?(sniffles)
Timmy:(smiles and nods)
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Stanford:Jamie there you are!! A-are you okay kiddo...you don't normally sleep that long
Jamie:W-what(sniffles) do you mean dad??
Stanford:It's almost noon
Jamie:O-oh my I-I'm sorry I guess I was [really] tired Even though I had a nightmare again...heh
Stanford:Well I guess I gotta get going bye!
Jamie:(ŏ︵ŏ⁠)
Timmy:Bye dad*!*
Alice:Hey big brother wanna play with me!
Jamie:O-oh um sure thing Alice that...that might a-actually c-calm me dow--
Mary:(puts her hand on Jamie)Awwe sorry Alice that does sound fun but Jamie AND Timmy have plans with ME

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Timmy:....!
Jamie:I...I-N-NO NO NO NO SHE'S-SHE'S LYING I-I-I - Mm*!!*
Mary:(covers his mouth) Don't listen to him Alice poor little
Jamie doesn't really know what he wants*!* He's just confused is all
Jamie:(whimpers)A-Alice *PLEASE* H-help me please! I-I don't wanna go*!*
Mary:SHUT IT!! C'mon boys let's go!(picks up Jamie)
Jamie:(whimpers)N-no!
Timmy:(frowns and follows)
Alice:Mm....
Tray:Hey I what did miss(yawns)
Alice:I have a feeling that big brother was trying to tell me something.
Tray:You wanna ransack the fridge?
Alice:Sure!

Jamie:Let me go p-please I-I don't want THIS!!!(Bites Mary's arm)
Mary:OW YOU LITTLE BRAT!!(throws him in the torment room)
Timmy:JAMIE ARE YOU OKAY?!
Jamie:I-(gets grabbed by a red string)
Also Jamie:AAHH ST-STOP!!!
Mary:(slowly pulls Jamie towards her) Ahh Jamie~ You were always my LEAST favorite*!*
Jamie:W-why.....WHY DO YOU DO THIS TO ME!! W-WHY DON'T H-HATE ME SO-- A-ACK!!
Mary:(grabs him by the neck) It's simple sweetie YOU WERE FIRST!!! YOU WERE ALWAYS THE FIRST!!
Jamie:I-I can't b-breathe! P-please s-stop!
Timmy:LEAVE MY BIG BROTHER ALONE!(jumps on Mary's shoulder and bites her)
Mary:AHH DAMMIT(drops Jamie)
Also Mary:(throws Timmy at the wall)
Timmy:Ow
Mary:(pulls out a gun at him)
Timmy:H-HEY WAIT DON'T SHOOT uh I'll um do something uh nice*!*
Mary:(shoots him with no hesitation)
Jamie:(whimpers)
Mary:(glares at Jamie)
Jamie:P-please don't h-hurt me! I-I'm sorry! I-I'm so sorry for-

Mary:FOR WHAT!!! Jamie sweetie you broke my wish. My wish having you be someone else but that doesn't seem to be the case especially now
Jamie:Wh-what do...you--YOU--GAH!!(gets stabbed in the head)
Also Jamie:. . . . .

(Later...)
Jamie:Uggggghhgggh I-I hate this! I-I'm sick of THIS so much!(sobs)
Timmy:Awe don't cry Jamie Atleast when we d- I-I mean atleast when we "black out" we get back up okay*!*
Jamie:Y-yeah but it hurts Timmy. IT STILL HURTS I-I CAN STILL FEEL THE PAIN! CONSTANTLY REPLAYING IN MY HEAD! IN MY MIND AND IT WON'T STOP