Writing gets better after 2 chapters I think
"No ziggy Davina Already warned me if I get in trouble She will tell mom and mom dose not look nice When she's mad ok " freya mocking what her sister had told Her "she won't know a thing please freya please you even promised I will always be their " ziggy said " That's when you fell and don't bring up the past " freya said "anyways I have to go sorry I would totally do whatever you were doing" said walking away while turning away from ziggy going to Davina "wanna paint" freya said smiling "no I have to go help Kurt " Davina said walking away "if you did not wanna hang out with me just say it that would not hurt my feelings" freya said throwing up her middle finger walking away from her sisterFreya grabbed a paper while writing down a note to her mom freya wrote many notes to her mom till she came home to give her mom "wait till you hear how Davina is treating me" freya wrote down aggressively till her pencil broke freya looking down at her hands that were now red letting out a sigh "oh" freya said getting a other Pencil till someone rudely came over and interrupted her " your handwriting dose suck" will Goode said reading what she wrote while chucking " what the hell do you want" freya said glaring at will " I was just getting something clam down" will said till he got interrupted by the devil herself Sheila " will come over here right now" Sheila said yelling" oh boy.
I slowly turn my head to hear what Sheila and Will were saying "yes ziggy she was right in my cabin" Sheila said explaining something to Will "ok let's go" Will said about to leave with Sheila " grab your lighter" Sheila said smirking oh hell no I'm not letting them burn my friend I slowly fold my note I made for my mom and put it in my back pack while slowly fallowing Will and the cobra slowly the cobra left and they went their separate ways are you seriously right now I slowly follow Will not making noise till I see ziggy running away while will put his hand up to block ziggy from ruing
I jump on Wills back trying to make him lose his Balance till Ziggy notices me " I thought you did not wanna join " ziggy said confusedly I slowly jump off wills back and smile at her " Well I tried painting and I remembered I suck at that so I wrote a note to my mom then I stalked them soo " Will looks at me confused on how he did not see that I was following them " then the cobra her self comes "your gonna hang witch" Sheila said with her 2 minions and her boyfriend siding next to her while ziggy was trying to get the blood out of her nose "Will grab her" Sheila said grabbing ziggy while their whole friend group is chanting something they can't be calling ziggy a witch if their acting like witches right now.
Thoughts on the book <3
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