I saw her in rainfall

chapter1

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Drew's point of view :

"Hey jack where is my car ,it's suppose to be here by now .you know I have to catch my flight ".

Jack is my bodyguard and family . he has been there. Since I rose to fame through facebook .

My videos of various songs , I covered were good enough to bring me to stardom .

'we are ready to go for hotel' said jack . We where going to one of the most expensive hotels in new York

Ok lets go

We reached into our car. After crossing swarm of fans outside the stadium .

Then it started raining when we reached the hotel . To pick up my luggage.

Jack went to my room to collect all my bags. I was waiting in the hotel reception .

Then I went through the internet and checked on my ex girlfriend .

She was the only girl I loved in last eight years .

I was into her so badly and still im . even though she is dating someone else.

She is pop star and an nice actress . I have ever seen .

Then suddenly I was missing my girl so badly . I saw a girl standing on the road in this heavy rainfall in between traffic.

She looked exactly like my ex girlfriend from behind .

I was watching her for like 10minutes and she looked beautiful in the rain .

She was enjoying the rainfall even though its so cold outside.

Then she crossed the road and came near the hotel door.

I went outside to look for her but she was gone .

Then I was circled by media and photographers asking me about my ex girl friend .

Jack brought the car and we went through the crowd of media .

Jack. Says,'why did you go out man these papz could have made. You lose your mind if they kept asking you about your ex girlfriend. . Don't do that again dude its not good'.

Then we went to the airport .all I was thinking about that girl and the way she was enjoying the rain ☔.

Its been a month since I wrapped My world tour.

All I have been thinking about the rain girl and I even more songs on that moment.

Evan comes in and says,'you have to go for the photo-shoot man wakeup '.

Evan sanders is my manager he looks after the whole management things .

He launched my career 10years ago.

Evan says ,'jack told me about your rain girl '.

Why this jack can't keep things to himself .

Evan says,'don't tell me you are going to look for her'.

Iam going to look for her.

Let's talk about this later.

I wore my cool shirt ,killer jeans and rayban Goggles.