PLS STOP MAKING YOUR OCS LIKE THIS SHIT SHJSJH
Yes, we know that King's Dominion is an assassin school. But no character (except for one, y'all know who we're talking about) actually enjoys killing people just for shits and giggles, y'know? Bree's OC's Carla Bianchi and Leticia Torrero don't actually enjoy killing people, they both just do it because they have to. Or Elle's OC Alessia Gotti never kills anybody in cold blood (there might be one, but you'll just have to read it ;)). You get the gist.
Never (and when we say never, we really mean it), ever write your OC killing someone like this:
i shot teh person n laughed. i just luv killing ppl yk!? its sm funnn!1!!11
THAT PAINED US TO WRITE BTW
The amount of times we've seen this kinda shit makes us wanna crawl back into our skins.
Try expanding how your OC feels about killing somebody. Because if you give this character a love interest and STILL make them a sociopath/psychopath who legitimately takes pleasure in killing people, that's not how psychology works.
Or maybe try give some backstory into why this character is killing somebody. Are they being forced to? Do they want revenge? That's for you to write!
Lastly, you could establish the relationship between the victim and the victor. Is this person close to your OC? Are they enemies? These are some great questions to answer in your writing!
this chapter was written by: bree & elle
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BILLY, writing tips
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