Writing practice V2

Story 1.

Since my other one is taking a WHILE, I thought I might make a different one that I actually have ideas for and won't go to waste!!
Tw: Kidnapping

You can skip character inventory if you want, although it might be crucial info!

Character inventory: Lucia (she/her)
Lucia has medium-length black hair, with bangs.
She wears blue frame glasses, and her eyes are a grey-blue shade.
Clothing style: Colors, bright, kidcore.
Sexuality: lesbian
(Dark skinned)
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Character inventory: Londyn (he/him)
Londyn has short fluffy Blue (originally black) hair.
His eyes are a dark, kind of black color.
Clothing style: Light academia.
Sexuality: bisexual, asexual
(Dark skinned)
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Character inventory: Nori (she/it)
Nori has long red-pinkish hair.
It's eyes are light blue.
Clothing style: Street wear
Sexuality: Bisexual

Oh and, if you couldn't tell, Lucia and Londyn are twins!

Brackets () = A/N
Italics = time skip, change in location, or pov change
Bold = Povs

On with the story!
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2:43 am. Tuesday, april 12.

Nori POV.
I slowly climbed the fence, sure to not make any noise. I had slipped up in the past and alerted guard dogs, so best to pay close attention to my movements. Cant risk getting mauled, amirite?

As soon as I was on the ground, I looked around.
I see no pets that could alert the home owners, and no other obstacle in my way, so I start moving further towards the house.

It was big, with a tan paint job on the outside walls and a green roof. Several windows near the kitchen, 4 upstairs, and 2 near the living room area. I knew this place well. I have to get an idea of what I'm going to be dealing with before making moves after all.
I know 2 people live there. Orphans, londyn Gyle, Lucia Gyle. Both newly 18, inheriting their parents house. They shouldn't be much of a threat, but just in case, I have backup.

No POV.
Holding the disposable phone tightly, she took a glance at the Lock Screen. "Ready." Read the text message she had received. She had made it to her destination, a wall on the side of the house, set up to where she could climb. The 'ladder' led up into a bedroom. Lucias bedroom. She had planned on taking Lucia first, because she wouldn't pose much of a threat compared to her ... rather big, brother Londyn. She knew their exact sleep schedules.
     Lucia goes to sleep early, around 8 pm. While her brother, stays up until around 4 am, or doesn't sleep at all. Nori had to be careful of this dangerous time frame, fore she couldn't risk being caught. Again.
Slowly making it up the vine wall, she made it to the window. Nori had known the window would be unlocked, so she didn't bother trying to check like she normally does, and opens it. It was a rather humid night, not much breeze, so the cold wouldn't be enough to wake Lucia up.
     Nori slowly crawled through the window, quiet as humanly possible. She grabbed a wet cloth out from its pocket, and grabbed Lucia, free arm around her shoulders/collar bone area, Lucia, now fully awake, started to fight back, not really understanding what was happening. and even tried to scream, but was unsuccessful to escape as Nori placed the cloth over her mouth and nose. ...

7:32 am. April 12th.

NO POV.
Londyn had made blueberry pancakes, and was going to go wake up his sister. He walked into her room, but she — wasn't there? He looked over at her window, which was very obviously open.
"Shit."

LUCIA POV.
Where...where am I? Why is it so dark..? What happened? I don't remember anything, except going to bed... am I dreaming? Is this a dream..?

NO POV.
Lucia had been tied to a chair, blindfolded, and left, in nori's bedroom, all while nori had gone to school.
At school, nori could barely pay attention to her classes, zoning out thinking of all the things she could do to Lucia, daydreaming and drooling about them. Her friends were slightly concerned, but brushed it off.

NORI POV.
I walk home, as usual. When I got to my, usually empty, driveway, I saw a car. une voiture? (A car?)
une voiture?
...
une voiture.
Why would their be a car in my driveway?
I don't recognize the car as one of my friends, or even ... "acquaintances"?
I decide to walk up to the car, and look in the window. Nobody. Huh.
I walk to my front door. And... what the hell?
SHIT. my fucking door was unlocked. I locked it before I left. I locked it before I left. I locked it before I left. I locked it before I left?
I slowly walk into the house, trying not to make noise, I grab a knife from my kitchen, just in case.
I make my way to my room, which is still closed and locked. Huh?
I begin to walk around the house, looking for someone, anyone. I come across an open door, which I didn't open before I left this morning, or even last night. My storage closet. I never used it, just boxes from when I moved in. I decided, if anyone WAS in there, they wouldn't be able to get out if I locked it, so, that's what I did. Took the key, and double locked the door. The door had locks because it was supposed to have a bathroom, but since I already had 2 other bathrooms, I didn't need it and used it to store boxes.

I went to check on the hostage, and she was still trying to escape, although clearly having done it enough to give up a few times.
She didn't hear me come in, which is good. I pulled my office desk chair to infront of her, she stopping moving, realizing she wasn't alone.
"W-who are you?! Where am I!?" She said with anger. "Hm, to answer your questions, 1. I'm Nori. 2. My bedroom of course!" Nori said cheerfully. "I won't hurt you, at least not yet." I stood up and just stared down at her. "What— what do you mean NOT YET?!!?!" "Not yet!" I said in that bubbly tone again. Lucia began crying once more, it was clear she had been crying most of the day, whilst trying to escape.

NO POV.
Friday, April 15th.
Nori had heard banging on the door she closed every so often, and it was getting annoying. She decided to go see who it was..
She approached the door, gun in hand. She slowly unlocked it, and opened it, to find — what?
One of the people she worked with. He had decided to go visit her, and it didn't go well. It was not satisfied with how he had intruded on it. His body was limp in front of the door, probably passed out form the lack of rest he was giving himself banging on the door. She carried him out, and sat him in his car, which was still parked outside her house because it didn't have the keys to move it.

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Ik the storage room thing was irrelevant but I added it anyways, deal with it NERDS

Anyways, gimme suggestions on how to improve and what things (if any) that I need to change/would be better if I changed them,
Also yes I know the triggers and intro to this DIDNT make sense the first time I published this part because I changed the fucking plot 2 times while writing bare with me.