The Creepypasta Rewrite We All Needed

Chapter 1

 There was a slam of the car door as a family exited their vehicle. The house stood tall in front of them as they got their things from the car as workers got the heavy things from the U-Haul truck. The Woods family were well off; Karen Woods was a fantastic realtor and her husband Jason Woods was a preacher. They just left their home in Texas after a bit of a fiasco with their children and moved up to Arkansas. We'll learn more about that later though. Their..sons Jeff and Liu seemed ok to say the least. Liu was a respectable child of God, a golden child to say the least. He was the favorite child and he couldn't do anything wrong in the eyes of his parents. Then there was Jeff... he was mainly the unwanted child, the one that wasn't supposed to happen. Karen originally wanted a son and a daughter but she got Jeff. So with her amazing thought process she decided to name him something unique that could go both ways, but mostly feminine, and named him Jeffica and raised him as a girl till they moved.

Now I'll be honest, neither of the kids had a good upbringing. When Liu was only three his father rekindled an old friendship with this man named Todd Parker. It did not turn out well as while Jason and Todd were getting closer, Todd was getting uncomfortably close with Liu. After around 8 years of this abuse they found out and sent Liu to therapy. Liu was professionally recognized with a dissociative disorder and soon reached fusion but they had to leave before they could get it in place so that he could later cope with the disorder to avoid more splits. Anyways back on track they are at the house in Arkansas. Liu is going to the trunk to get his box of belongings but this boy walks over with his family.

"Hi, I'm Deborah. I just noticed you moving in. Do you need any help?" the other woman asked Liu's mother. Liu was more interested in her son however.

"So what's your name? I'm Liu Woods by the way" He holds out his hand to the other boy who graciously took his hand. "I'm Jae Carson. Nice to meet you." He gave Liu a wink and walked away to help. Liu just stood there in silence processing what had just happened until Jeff walked over and patted his shoulder.

"You good bro?" Jeff looked at him concerned but also a bit not all there anyways. He knew about his brother's addiction as did the whole family seeing as it was one of the reasons they moved to Arkansas.

"Yeah I'm alright, just thinking. Hey Jeff.. first place gets to choose the best room."

"Bet," Jeff says with a devious look.

The boys run in as fast as their legs can take them, the younger one taking the other down by the legs to get to the best room faster. Jeff of course wins, the little cheater, but Liu doesn't mind seeing as it's a nice change to see his brother act more normal than drugged up higher than Mt. Everest.

Liu claimed the room on the left of the house and started putting his stuff away. As he did so, he heard his mother and Deborah talking downstairs. He didn't pay much mind till he heard someone walking upstairs. Hearing his door open he turned to look and saw Jae there closing it.

"What are you doing?" Liu inquired as he seemed slightly unnerved but he slowly put his guard back down as Jae held up his hands and told him he wasn't going to do anything bad, just wanted to talk.

"Okay, well what do you wanna talk about?" Liu went over after setting his stuff down to sit on the bed that was inside his room by now. Jae came and sat beside him.

"Well first off I wanted to say i got some suckers for ya," Jae handed him a blue raspberry sucker which Liu accepted "And also that you're cute as fuck." That's when Liu nearly choked on his sucker, spluttering before speaking clearly.

"What on Earth? You- You don't just say that kind of stuff out of nowhere! I barely even know you and first off I-" He was abruptly shut up by a pair of lips on his own. Liu, of course, has brain cells and tries to fight him off but his hands get pinned down, but soon he just gives in accepting it's going to happen, granted he's not happy about it but it's.. Not the worst kiss he's ever had, wait what was he thinking?! He needed to make him stop!

He feels something try to enter his mouth and he lets it happen only to bite down on it to make the other stop which he does.

"What on God's green Earth were you thinking? You don't just kiss people out of nowhere either. I have half a mind to go down and tell them about this." Liu was furious; He couldn't believe what he just did, the nerve of that boy! He looked back at him only to see he was laughing at him with a smug look. Which, in fact, only pissed Liu off even more.

"Why are you laughing at you- you- imbecile!" Liu was red in the face at this point. He was so frustrated with this boy!

"Wow, so proper with your big boy words, go back to key smashing you fucking twink of a preachers son. Bet everyone here is dying to hear the new Christian boy in town is a fucking cum drinker-" Liu promptly shut the other up with a slap.

"Listen here, YOU kissed ME and I never said I was a-"

"Well you sure kiss like one." Jae snapped back at him.

Liu shut his mouth, glaring at him. "That's only what you say, I never kissed back so how would you know?"

"I know because you submitted. A good straight Christian boy would have fought harder. Now I have a proposition. You stick with me and I won't tell your parents or spread it around the school." Jae said with a smug look on his face still.

"Who would believe you anyways? My parents don't know you and they care far more about me than anyone else. Who's to say they will even take your words with a grain of salt?" Liu said, challenging him.

"I have a well kept reputation here. I made an amazing first impression on your family and I don't think preacher Jason would care much if he found out his favorite son was gay by some random stranger." Liu stood there silent. His mind blanked and he couldn't see a way out of it.

"Fine, I'll stick with you then." Liu looked defeated but just sat back down, head in his hands as Jae put an arm on his back.

"Good Boy."