Taking Neverland (a Peter Pan fanfiction!)

Navi in Neverland

So this is my new story! It's a Peter Pan fiction that follows more towards the movie Hook then any other movie or version of the lovely story, in this story Peter will be 18 while Navi is 17 (she only just made it into Neverland due to the sympathy Tink had for her) I do not own anything to do with Peter Pan! This is just simply a fanfiction I thought of while watching the movie Hook :) hope you guys enjoy it please leave your comments and don't forget to vote :) all opinions on my writing are welcome please if you don't like how I have done something mention it! I'm here to learn as well as share my creative ideas :)

Navi's POV//

I woke in my swing bed, the sun was just coming up over the ocean. I looked out over Neverland, my Neverland. I could see pirate bay just over on the left side of the island. Pirate bay was a small docking point where he lived. Captain James Hook! He was the man known for pure evil, he had killed many men and woman and some of my lost boys! I'll never forget what terror he has cast over my Neverland. I sighed and looked down at the water below, I could see the mermaids playing along the rocks not far from the cliff the tree house stood on, the lost boys and I had built the tree house on a small cliff just off of the island, it was impossible to get to unless you flew or where as lite as a small boy! I jumped to my feet ready for the day to start, I instantly flew up above the tree house and let out a loud mighty crow! "Wake up lost boys!" I screamed flying in and out of their tiny huts, some scrambled to their feet following my lead down to the dinning table while others groaned and rolled back into their pillows. I sat at the head of the table waiting for the boys to stumble into my presence, "Nibs! Curly!" I yelled when they where the last to venture down the tree to our gathering. I waited impatiently tapping my fingers on the old wood table when Tink came flying down the tree side, "Tink!" I said cheerfully looking at the tiny light that now flew up onto my shoulder, now fairies can't talk like you and I, they have an entire language of their own, that only two people where said to ever learn, I of course was one of these two people while the other was said to be Peter Pan, the boy who left everything and everyone for a simple girl who wanted to grow up! "Hook has been to the main land, an he hasn't come back alone!" Tink said in a fright, unfortunately fairies where so small they only had room for 1 emotion at a time! The panic was taking over Tink's small body and I was afraid she would wear her tiny little heart out, I laughed loud and clear to get the all of the lost boys attention, "What is it Navi?" Tootles asked curiously, "Tink has told me Hook has recruited a new man!" I said standing up onto the table, I smiled down at the twins who pulled on each other's hairs. I kicked a cup over in their direction to gather their attention once again.

"Shall we go pay a visit to Mr Hook?" I said jumping off the end of the tables just as the boys all cheered loudly, they all ran around like the crazy kids they are. I pulled my long golden sword out of it's sheaths and waited for the boys as they got their weapons. Tink sat quietly on my shoulder, she no longer looked worried, now she looked just as excited as the boys. "So what do we know of his new recruit?" I asked playing with my sword childishly.

"He is much younger then the other pirates he has recruited in the past" Tink said pushing my long brown hair out of her way.
I didn't ask anymore questions about the new man, I didn't plan on letting him stay here for very long.

The lost boys, Tink and I flew down to pirate bay silently, landing next to one of the small shops on the end of the dock. I quickly pulled a hat off one of the drunken fools and placed it on my head while quickly taking a long black cape off of one of the men that was fornicating with one of the ladies that sold themselves to the pirates. The lost boys looked at the action in disgust while I simply kept walking by pushing the old horrible memories into the back of the darkest part of my mind. I left the lost boys hiding in some small barrels by Hooks ship while Tink and I climbed aboard and stood amongst the crew. "Hook! Hook! Hook!" The crew chanted his name as he stepped out of his chambers. Hook looked over his crew seeming pleased with himself,

"My dearest crew" he cheered while lifting his hand and hook into the air. I looked around for the new recruit but all the men on deck where all to familiar to be him. Hook was talking out to his men but I zoned out looking for his new man, "at last I bring you Peter Pan himself!" I looked up in shock at Hooks words, he couldn't of actually found Peter!? I mean he always said he would get his revenge but had he actually managed it? I stood looking up at Hook when Smee started to pull on a small rope, when a net was pulled up from under the deck, I saw a young man, he couldn't have been no more then a year older then I!

"Set him free" Hook said waving his good arm at Smee, "it's time to see what Pan has become!" I looked in shock as the ropes were cut and the man stepped out, he had short blonde hair and a tall fit figure, could it really be him after all these years?