Battle Legacy (Loomian Legacy x Bfb crossover) (ON HIATUS)

Introduction

So I'm actually kinda scared because

this is the first time I ever wrote a book,

So please do give me Critism

So here's all the main characters! :

Balloony:
a 14 year old boy that is a kind character, But hates being told what to do and does a lot of things on his own, he's pretty smart and good at puzzles, He can also be brave and protective

Blocky:
A 14 year old mischievous prankster that's not fond of socialising with others outside his friend group, however he is empathetic at times, but seriously don't piss him off or you'll become shit

Grassy:
a 9 year old boy that's joyful and enjoys pulling pranks with blocky, He talks in first person POV, and isn't afraid to share his feelings, he thinks he can also be useful he seems to have high self esteem but he has trouble saying words at times, he can also screw things up

Flower:
A 14 year old that's pretty short tempered but is really sweet, Just don't say her sweater suck or something idk, but she has a slightly bad reputation around roria (due to being a bitch) but really she's pretty nice when you get to know her, she always thinks highly of herself at times which annoys others however rarely does that now and she's learning how to respect and gain respect back

I'm probably gonna do a part to idk I'm tired rn

So bye