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hello, quick note & notice, i guess? you don’t need to read this if you finished the book and for the ones who are just reading this, please kindly read all of it, thank you.

i’ve been getting different kinds of comments these past few months (especially rude ones and the note of hinata being “innocent”) and it’s getting on me. idk if i should be happy, angry, guilty, doubtful on writing this book because of some of the comments. yes, i’m really sensitive when it comes to reading some comments. it is better if you guys should but you can use tone indicators so i can understand your tone because one of the comments came to me as rude and should be educational but it came out as a “criticism” or rather hate for the whole book and myself as well, if you know what i mean.

if you are going to give me criticism, please give me the constructive ones because as i said, it’s better to let me know what i just wrote last year than sending me rude comments and me, assuming that you’re hating my writing.


i know hinata is not innocent and can’t understand some metaphors and such. because of that, i made this book. it should be a joke towards the half of the fandom that doesn’t understood the whole characterization input towards other characters. i put half of my efforts here because, as i said just a joke and a practice book towards my writing. and to be honest, i came to hate this book in the end.

i don't know, if i got impatient and really hurt, i was thinking on deleting this book but for the sake of people who loved and liked this book, i‘ll just pretend that this doesn’t exist and i guess i won’t be deleting this. that’s all, thank you for understanding.

you can cancel me now or hate me or send me death threats if you guys want, if this message came out as rude for all of you ot it irritates you or it came out weird for you guys. haha.

A QUICK MESSAGE TO THE NEW READERS:

my writing style here is hella ugly, if you don’t like the way i write the characters and plot, don’t read or continue further, i accept constructive criticisms and opinions especially to hinata being “innocent” and other characters to educate the others as well but as the chapters gone by, it’s not the main characteristic of him/them and it is not mentioned on the story anymore. i do read your comments, be mindful of them and put tone indicators if you can. might some offend me but that’s okay and it is part of it. thank you for stopping by, see you around.

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