New Guardian (ON HOLD)

Chapter 3

Hey this is a rewrite of last chapter, I got reviews that said it wasnt very good, so making it more interesting. I'm going to leave out some parts for those who have read the original part 3. It was an outline, just something for those who like my story to read. So enjoy the new part :)

Once at the hospital, the doctors took Phoenix into a room and started to scan and assess her wounds. The monitor started to let out a low, nonstop ring. Everyone was shuffling around and talking loudly. "Ready, Clear!" The screen showed, instead of a heart beat, a straight horizontal line. "Clear."

"Phoenix!" Kristeen wailed. She had ridden in the ambulance with Phoenix. After about the 10th time of trying to jump-start her heart, the doctors were about to give up. Everyone was tense, and through the window, the moon was brighter than usual. There was a Beep... Beep...Beep. The doctors relaxed a little, until a man in a suit walked in the room. The doctors had stabilized her and she lay sleeping quietly, partly sitting up. "Sir, you're not allowed in there!" a nurse yelled after the man. He shut the sound-proof glass door and Bunny assumed that he started saying things the doctors didn't like because all of them were gesturing wildly.

A man with dirty blond hair and freckles, who look about 20, seemed either the most offended or the most protective, it was hard to tell. "I have a bad felling," Bunny said messing with one of his boomerangs. Sandy nodded and made a picture of Pitch above his head. "Couldn't have said it better myself Sandy," Bunny said walking toward Phoenix's room,"What do you think their saying?"

They were more than often motioning toward Phoenix and Kristeen, who was sitting by her bed side holding her hand. Even with all the yelling that they were doing, the sound-proof glass was working very well. One doctor stormed out of the room, and the suited man followed. Bunny slipped in the room quietly through the door and nealed beside the young girl."Hey kid, how you hanging in there?"

"They want to take me away from here, some where, I don't know where. My mom's coming back, I know it." Bunny noticed that she and Phoenix had matching bracelets. "I know kid, I'm sure she's coming."

(Next part is something that I thought would be cute if Bunny did)

Bunny was walking out of the room when a young, weak voice called,"Bunny."

Bunny hopped to the room where the voice came from, and found a little girl not older than 7. She was sitting on the hospital bed and from the looks of it, she was a cancer patient. "You're the Easter Bunny. Right?" the girl said, coughing slightly. Bunny's green eyes shone with sympathy and pity. "Yeah, mate, I am. What's your name?"

"Alexa, Mr. Easter Bunny. Her icy blue eyes looked sad,"You're probably to busy to stay and talk to me." Bunny really was busy, but he couldn't just leave, he would feel to guilty. "Naw, I'd rather stay here and talk with you, Alexa." His Australian accent was visible as he spoke.

Interested in what Bunny was doing, Tooth, North, Sandy, and Jack walked into the room. The little girl in the room was to fantasized with Bunny and the patterns in his fur to notice them walk in. "How tall are you?" Alexa asked running her hands along one of Bunny's ears. "I'm 6 foot 1" he replied tickling her face with his other ear making Alexa giggle happily.

North cleared his throat, getting only Bunny's attention. Alexa was still messing with Bunny's ear. "Bunny, we have to go."

A sad glint crossed the spirit of hope's eyes. "Alexa, I have to go," Bunny said standing. Alexa looked sad again,"Here, hold on to this, I'll be back. I promise." Bunny said handing her one of his boomerangs. The guardians watched as the girl put the boomerang under her pillow and said good-bye to Bunny.

"That was nice, Kangaroo," Jack said twirling his staff one they were in the lobby. Bunny growled, he hated when Frost called him a Kangaroo. "It's Bunny," he said angrily," and why do we have to go?" It was more than obvious he had had fun with the dying little girl. "We need to figure out where Pitch is, he's not at his underground home and if in any way he was connected to this," North finished gesturing to Phoenix. "Plus, we can't leave anyone behind to guard her, we need everyone's help."

(Goes to middle of the night about 12, 1am)

Stepping silently from the shadows that almost engulfed the girl in the hospital bed, Pitch's golden-yellow eyes gleamed. The boogeyman's square jaw and dark robe like outfit only made him seem creepier. An evil smile crept across his face. "You will make me powerful again," Pitch said, making a deep scratch in her shoulder, leaving a black scar thin and small enough that only if you were for it could you find it." Now, have nightmares," Pitch said turning a memory of Phoenix and her mom, before her mom started to hate her for no reason, into a nightmare. As silently as he came, Pitch disappeared and went to his home. There was a single golden tooth canister left in his home from when he and his nightmares had taken all the teeth from Tooth's 'palace', 'realm' what ever they called it. He picked it up and opened it, and despite Pitch's heartlessness, a single black dream sand tear crept it's way down from his eye, to the canister.

Hope this rewrite was better than the original, tell me how I did.