a big night to remember

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It was a sunny day in Chicago. Leisa, Dominique, and me were at the beach. It was summer vacation we were looking to have some fun; we had spent the first half of the day shopping. It was about 2pm. The beach wasn't packed but it wasn't empty. There were the usual people that you would see on the beach the tanners, the group of boys playing football, the group of girls playing volley ball and the swimmers of course. "It's so beautiful here". "chica you say that all the time" Dominique said to me while laughing.

Leisa:

I was zoning out watching the waves when I saw a football fly and land right on what Alexis was building in the sand. "You okay" I heard a voice say and then I heard Alexis answer back saying yeah I think so. I snapped back to reality. I walked over to her. "oh my god your eyes can you see". She answered back with a sort of and that they itched and burned. "Let's go to the bathroom".I walked to the bathroom and left Dominique sitting there confused. She must have zoned out too.

Dominique:

what's going on I asked confused when I realized that there was a cute blonde standing rocking on his feet. It was quiet until his friends came over. "Dude where the ball?". "Right there" the blonde said to his friends." Well grab it and let's get back to playing" the shirtless one said. "Hey jerks we almost hit and girl with the ball, we got sand in her eyes unlike you jerks I want to say sorry even thou it was your fault David". the blonde said with frustration. "Whoa no fighting" I said stepping in. I grabbed the ball and gave it to them. "Since you four don't care what you did to my friend you can go play your stupid football game!"

Alexis:

after washing my eyes out with water, leisa said that we should go get me eye drops and call it a day. I agreed because my eyes were still burning and red. I looked like a raccoon with rabbies! When we got back to where Dominique was with our stuff leisa and I well all I saw was blurry figures, anyhow we noticed guys talking to her.

Drew:

it was quiet no one was talking. We noticed the other two girls coming back one of them had said Dominique I see you made new friends lol but we should go she needs eye drops. how bad is it I had asked curiously. Its noting serious her eyes just burn from irritation and around her eyes are red from her rubbing her eyes. I look like a raccoon with rabbies! "I'm so sorry about my friend he got a little out of hand" I said glaring at David. "It's okay" she had said smiling. "Wait you guys look familiar!" the other girl had said crossing her arms. "you probably know our band varsity fanclub "

TO BE CONTINUED :)

whatcha think dont be afriad to tell me if their is anything you dislike or think should be changed and dont be a afriad to give ideas :]

ps: what do you think will happen next and what will be the girls reaction

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